Talk:Aero-Cross/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:47, 1 May 2020 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 13:47, 1 May 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "and the third game released under the Namco Generations series of video game remakes." - think the first mention of "game" can be deleted from this sentence
 * "The game was announced in October 2010 and was announced as being cancelled in December 2012 following a lack of updates on its production." - try to change this sentence to avoid repeating the word "announced"
 * Wikilink power-ups and level to the relevant article to help non-experts

Gameplay

 * Wiklink timer to Time limit (video games), level to Level (video games), power-ups to power-up and stage to Stage (video games) to help non-Gamers
 * Link slipstream to Drafting (aerodynamics)
 * "Running behind other runners creates" - try to change the structure of the sentence to avoid repetition of a similar word

Development and promotion

 * "Aero-Cross was intended as the third game under the Namco Generations label, a brand created by Namco Bandai Games for use on modernized remakes of their older video games." - older titles.

Cancellation

 * "Fletcher commented on the game's new features and for building upon the original Metro-Cross gameplay in an interesting manner. He commented:" - the text in bold isn't needed
 * "believed that the game likely never would have had" - would likely never have
 * "that big of an audience" - large