Talk:Aeroflot Flight 593/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 22:51, 5 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. What a tragic accident, especially when you read that leaving the whole thing to itself would have worked out... On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:04, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Could we link "relief pilot" to aircrew as it's slightly jargony.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Link Aeroflot in the article prose.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Powered with..." maybe engvar but I would say "powered by".
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ref 2 and its archive not working for me.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 16:18, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "over 9,675" etc seems odd to say "over" such a precise number.
 * ✅, rounded down to 9,500. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ""the jet aircraft " strange place to use "jet aircraft", would be better in the "Aircraft" section.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Merge first two short paras of "accident" section.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ref 8 and its archive not working for me, suggest all are checked.
 * ✅, for some reason, the archive links were from webcitation.org instead of archive.org. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 16:18, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Kudrinsky's son Eldar..." you already named his son and daughter, no need to re-introduce them.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Link ailerons etc in the article prose.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Kuznetsk Alatau can be linked.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * No need to link Chinese.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 15:53, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Russian language is overlinked.
 * ✅. Thanoscar21talk, contribs 16:18, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , all fixed. Thanks, Thanoscar21talk, contribs 16:18, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think you'd better check the others, a spot check on another archive URL linking to webcitation.org failed too, they all need to be replaced. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 16:33, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , archive.org hasn't archived ref 9, and the webcitation.org still works, so I've kept that. Ref 16, I've changed it to archive.org, but there, the sidebar and everything comes up, but the page itself is blank. I've changed everything else to archive.org. Thanks, Thanoscar21talk, contribs 16:50, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Great, thanks, I think that's it. Cheers, promoting to GA. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 17:38, 6 March 2021 (UTC)
 * , thanks for your time and responsiveness! Thanoscar21talk, contribs 14:46, 8 March 2021 (UTC)
 * you're welcome, I enjoyed reading the article. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 14:48, 8 March 2021 (UTC)