Talk:Aerosol mass spectrometry

Review
Hello Ben! At first glance you're article is excellent, it's extremely detailed and easy to read. I like that you added images, but is there any way to increase the size of them? They seem to be overshadowed by the wordiness of the article. We want readers to be able to look over and see all of the detail in the images and connect that to what you're conveying in the article. Also, I would suggest that you go back through the article once more because I noticed several grammar errors, but those shouldn't take much to correct. Moreover, I noticed that in alot of the sections only one of several sentences has a citation, so are you suggesting that the other information is common knowledge? I say this because you give a lot of background about people that had key involvement in the development of certain aspects of the aerosol mass spectrometry, but I don't see a citation for where you're getting this information. So I would suggest going back in and if you mention a certain person and his or her contribution to the topic (or anything else that the normal person wouldn't know), that you give some sort of reference immediately following the statement. MiaJ601 (talk) 19:39, 15 April 2015 (UTC)