Talk:Afaf Meleis

Neutrality
I'm tagging the article because it needs a more neutral tone. I don't know how to feel about an editor saying they're removing the COI template because they rewrote the article and don't have a COI. On one hand, this version is better sourced. On the other hand, it's mainly sourced to schools Meleis is connected to (so it needs more independent sourcing), and it uses WP:PEACOCK phrases, like "renowned", "unprecedented" and "sought-after expert".

Also, this edit still added some similar phrasing as an earlier (likely COI) edit from 2016 - such as having an almost identically formatted "Selected works" section, and using phrases like "internationally renowned", and calling her a "nurse scientist and medical sociologist".

Anyways, it needs some cleanup, so I'm tagging it until the phrasing issues can be addressed, and until sources can be double checked or replaced with more independent ones. - Whisperjanes (talk) 23:09, 1 December 2021 (UTC)