Talk:African Democratic Congress

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2018 and 5 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Danielleaar.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 16:56, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Comment
Looks good. This article is neutral and uses a variety of quality sources. The only thing that stuck out to me as a potential problem was the phrase in the second section that says the Constitution is "supposed to govern". The phrasing seems to imply that the Constitution does not actually govern the party, but you never explain that idea. Danielnicastro (talk) 19:55, 12 October 2018 (UTC)

Coco edits
-I would watch out for uses of passive voice--esp. at the beginning "was registered/ was originally named/ was formed" because you use a lot of times in a short paragraph

-really solid use of citiations!

-I don't think you need to say "the African dem congress has a constitution" because you already said that in the first paragraph, I think you could change that sentence to "The African Democratic Congress' constitution is supposed to govern the workings of the party"

-You also say "According to the constitution" two times so I would try and phrase that in a different way — Preceding unsigned comment added by Coco223 (talk • contribs) 19:13, 15 October 2018 (UTC)

Potential Merge?
Given its former name, is this party the same as Alliance for Democracy (Nigeria)? If so, the pages should be merged. - Sdkb (talk) 20:34, 21 November 2018 (UTC)
 * I see why this may have caused confusion, but the two parties are not the same. Danielleaar (talk) 01:59, 26 November 2018 (UTC)