Talk:Afrolychas braueri/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:19, 2 May 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's it, a nice neat article. It's on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:54, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Seychelles forest scorpion should be created as a redirect to this article.
 * "critically endangered " is overlinked in the lead.
 * "the IUCN and is" explain IUCN before using the abbr.
 * Worth mentioning that Silhouette Island is on the UNESCO World Heritage Site tentative list?
 * "it was split" what was split?
 * wasn't - avoid contractions.
 * "internal granules" what are those in this context?
 * "have 14-18 " en-dash.
 * "medically significant" for humans.
 * "killed individuals of this species" perhaps as this is a new section, be clear: "killed individual Seychelles forest scorpions"
 * " Silhouette Island", "Mahé" and "Praslin" are overlinked.
 * "The Seychelles forest scorpion is believed to live in very low population densities" you already said this two sections back.
 * Ref 1 has a spare pair of quote marks.


 * are you going to address these comments? I normally allow seven days before failing.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 09:42, 6 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Ok, I'm failing this down to a lack of response. Hopefully the short list of items can be addressed at some point in the future. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 12:20, 11 May 2021 (UTC)