Talk:Afterglow (1997 film)

Fair use rationale for Image:Afterglow imp.jpg
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BetacommandBot (talk) 03:53, 12 February 2008 (UTC)

Article Grammer
The english is unreadable in the plot description, due to the complete lack of essential gramatical elements. Can the writer (or someone) please take the time to edit this into a reasonable, understandable form. Also, the movie this article concerns really does not need to be spelled out in such complete detail and could use drastic reduction.

Changed plot as suggested Alex Hudghton (talk) 10:38, 28 February 2016 (UTC)

Please Rewrite
I came here looking for information on this film, which I haven't seen.

It reads like it is written by someone for whom English is a second language. The grammar is horrible, and the content rambles in a completely disconnected fashion. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bpolhemus (talk • contribs) 20:25, 2 September 2013 (UTC)

Changed plot as suggestedAlex Hudghton (talk) 10:39, 28 February 2016 (UTC)