Talk:Agadzagadza

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The author does a very good job at keeping a neutral tone throughout the article with their use of neutral language. The article contains neither overly positive or negative information about Agadzagadza; the author does a good job at reflecting the role Agadzagadza plays in African myth. The lead is very straightforward, states exactly what the article is going to focus on, and reflects the cultural importance of Agadzagadza in the origin of death for the Bura people. The sections are well organized and make sense when scrolling down through the page. I liked that the author included different perspectives of the same myth so that the reader gets the full story and can form their own opinions and perspectives about Agadzagadza. The author does not impose their opinions or perspectives on the reader. By reading the article I cannot guess the perspective of the author because there is neutral language and tone being used throughout and no biased opinions that stick out to the reader. The article has reliable sources, all published books, that are referenced throughout the article; the statements are drawn fairly equally from four sources in relation to the length of the section/subtopic being addressed. Some things that the author can change to improve the article is to clean up the references/bibliography section, add a title to the page before the lead section, and format the headings in the proper way so that a table of contents is generated for the article. Besides this, the article is very strong and presents the information about the importance of Agadzagadza in African mythology very well. Nikkimats (talk) 12:46, 15 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Nikkimats thank you for your review. You&#39;ve got Koalatee I agree that your next steps going forward are tightening up the formatting, adding sections, and general organization. You've done a really impressive amount with very little material, and I think the lack of suggestions for improvement in your peer review is evidence of your article's strength. Of course, keep looking for more sources and please let me know if/when you follow up with the Wikipedia expert about the controversy over the old page. I have no idea what they will advise you to do, but hopefully it is a go! Have you been able to find anything about the Bura people at all? Also, did you see that Agadzagadza is mentioned on this page https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_George_Frazer ? Maybe a good place to link to and to find additional sources. Keep up the excellent work! Gardneca (talk) 08:21, 17 April 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for kind feedback and the suggestion. I did see the frazer page, in regards to the origin of death from different African stories. I am trying to find a good way to incorporate it in the last section to beef up the length. I will try your suggestion on contacting them and keep you posted. :) You&#39;ve got Koalatee (talk) 03:06, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 January 2019 and 15 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): You've got Koalatee. Peer reviewers: Nikkimats.

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