Talk:Aggressionism

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 January 2018 and 18 May 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hchan10.

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Psychology 101 Critic
I feel like this article needs a lot of help. Yes the article gives a small definition of what agressionism is but that isn't quite enough. I feel like it needs to be a much more detailed article and I would like to see more examples and situations agressionism occurs.(talk) 3:09 September 17, 2011


 * I feel the same thing about this article. Adding various situations showing how and where agressionism takes place might be a good way to make this article more interesting.--Samirayasmeen.1 (talk) 14:24, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

Psychology 101 Critique
I think this article nedes to give more definition of what aggressionism is, it gives us some details but just not enough and it is very vauge. (talk)) —Preceding undated comment added 01:39, 20 September 2011 (UTC).

Removed material
I've removed some recent edits by the students. There were several problems: Let me know if it's not clear why I've removed the material and I can explain further. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 18:57, 25 November 2011 (UTC)
 * One footnote (to Genetic and environmental stability differs in reactive and proactive aggression) was added without being attached to any text. It might well be relevant but please add whatever text can be sourced to that article and then add the reference to that.
 * Some text was personal commentary about the article; that belongs on the talk page.
 * The remaining text and citation was about aggression, not about aggressionism. Certainly the two are connected, but the cited article did not mention the word "aggressionism", and there is a separate article on "aggression", so it is not really relevant to this article.


 * Thank you for your reply. I was thinking to show a basic link on how evolution can take place in fish species in case of aggression, then use the word aggressionism as a theory than can be connected to aggression.--Samirayasmeen.1 (talk) 14:30, 15 October 2014 (UTC)

Three Ways to improve the article
1. The article can use some definition on aggression as there is no particular definition for the word ‘aggressionism’. At first, a basic knowledge can be added on aggression and then the word aggressionism can be related to the details. In short, along with definition some examples can be shown to give the audience a better understanding of what aggression or aggressionism is really about. 2. Moreover, the article just introduces a single sentence about human aggression and how it leads to war but aggression is also seen in other animals like fish, monkeys and plants. Few sentences about various groups of animals will give a better view of aggression. 3. My topic on aggression mainly focuses on fish species and how this attitude can manipulate different aspects of their life. Moreover, it can also be added if there is any way the aggression in fish can be decreased or treated. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Samirayasmeen.1 (talk • contribs) 03:14, 1 October 2014 (UTC)

[ Moved from article Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) ]

It would be interesting to know that aggression can be noticed in fish due to dominance hierarchies, territoriality, sex, domestication and others. — Preceding unsigned comment added by User:Samirayasmeen.1 (talk • contribs)

New Student
Hello, I'm a new student and I took interest in this topic. I was assigned to create a Wikipedia article on a biology stub and I hope I can work with anyone else working on this page as well. Also, if there are any editors that come here often, it's nice to meet you. Hchan10 (talk) 14:29, 11 April 2018 (UTC)

Current Article (plagiarized)
For now, I would like to keep the current article. Although I found that this meaning was phrased in another website, I'm not sure whether the website plagiarized from this Wikipedia page or the user who created this first definition plagiarized from the website. Therefore, I'll refrain from deleting it. Here's the website, http://www.popflock.com/learn?s=Aggressionism. Hchan10 (talk) 15:08, 11 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Considering the "This article uses material from the Wikipedia page available here. It is released under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share-Alike License 3.0." line on that page, it would be safe to assume it is a mirror of the content here. Kuru   (talk)  12:09, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

New Content
I added some more content to the page. I also edited parts of the previous published page because its clarification was needed. Hchan10 (talk) 16:55, 16 April 2018 (UTC)

Update
I agree that this article needs a lot of help. My view is that it is very argumentative and it lacks sources despite making a number of claims. I have edited the lead and added some info, including a description of aggression. Also, for those who would be interested to contribute, I hope that the tone would be followed for the rest of the article. If you have questions, please send me a message. Thanks! Darwin Naz (talk) 23:33, 11 December 2018 (UTC)

Wikipedia Ambassador Program course assignment
This article is the subject of an educational assignment at St. Charles Community College supported by WikiProject Psychology and the Wikipedia Ambassador Program&#32;during the 2011 Q3 term. Further details are available on the course page.

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