Talk:Agrippina the Elder/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 10:01, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  10:01, 25 January 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a ✅
 * 1.b ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a ✅
 * 2.b ✅
 * 2.c ✅
 * 2.d ✅ (Highest is 0%.)
 * 3
 * 3.a ✅
 * 3.b ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a ✅
 * 6.b ✅
 * No DAB links ✅
 * No Dead links ✅
 * Images appropriately licensed ✅

Prose Suggestions

 * His untimely death in AD 19 upended those plans, however suggest However, those plans were upended by his untimely death in AD 19.
 * done


 * who was seemingly on his deathbed in 23 BC, suggest who appeared to be on his deathbed in 23BC.
 * done


 * However, Marcellus died of an illness that had spread throughout the city of Rome that year. suggest However, Marcellus died that year of an illness that became an epidemic in Rome
 * done


 * With Marcellus gone, suggest Now, with Marcellus dead,
 * done


 * Pannonians gave up on their plans suggest Pannonians gave up and surrendered.
 * done


 * Tiberius and the Ignotus is the the supposed to be here?
 * Yes, because "Ignotus" was not the child's actual name and the gender isn't known. Grammatically, I think it's as though someone were saying "Tiberius and the boy". I could be wrong, though.


 * period Caligula's reign needs an of between Caligula and reign.
 * done


 * That is all my comments. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  17:27, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
 * You're working overtime today. SpartaN (talk) 17:31, 25 January 2018 (UTC)