Talk:Ahimsa in Jainism/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miniapolis (talk · contribs) 14:09, 14 June 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for nominating Ahimsa in Jainism as a good article. A few issues from the start of the review:
 * Per MOS:ACCESS, "Do not make pseudo-headings using bold or semicolon markup. Screen readers and other machines can only use correctly formatted headings" (Ascetic Practices for adherence of Ahiṃsā, Laity Practices for adherence of Ahiṃsā).
 * Per WP:DOCTCAPS, "ahiṃsā" should not be capitalized throughout the article (it's particularly overcapitalized in the lead).
 * Throughout the article only the first word of a header is capitalized, and headers should not ordinarily begin with "The".

To be continued soon.  Mini  apolis  14:09, 14 June 2013 (UTC)


 * The only issue above I see needing correction before the article is passed is the first (to accommodate those with screen readers). Looking ahead to FA, one external link (to Forgiveness in Jainism) is broken and I recommend a copyedit from the Guild of Copy Editors before submission.  Mini  apolis  15:24, 14 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Since the formatting problems were so minor, I've tweaked them myself. Congratulations!  Mini  apolis  15:30, 14 June 2013 (UTC)