Talk:Aiden Ford/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sanguis Sanies (talk) 14:35, 26 November 2009 (UTC)

Greetings! I've previously reviewed Jeffrey Spender and as there is a rather large backlog under Film and Television I thought I'd help out and review some more.

Lead/Infobox
No major problems that I can see.

Character arc
✅ "The only family that Ford mentions are his grandparents." Then why does the infobox mention a cousin?

✅ "Ford is diagnosed to have suruvived an overdose of addictive" rewrite and spelling.

✅ CITEs two and three should be moved to their respective claims.

✅ "Pegasus galaxy to harvest their enzyme that would give him super-human strength." needs a rewrite, also I'm seem to remember he needed the enzyme (in the sense that he was addicted) am I remembering correctly?

✅ "The Wraith-enzyme allowed Ford to immediately rematerialize on-board a Wraith-hive ship," it did?

✅ "help in destroying an entire Wraith Hive-ship," as opposed to part of one?

Conceptual History
✅ Doesn't mention developing the character before the series started.

✅ "Ford had not worked as intended and was highly underused as a result." needs a CITE.

✅ Sentence 4 and 5 both need CITEs.

✅ "they had reduced Ford to a recurring character in the series." Can the announcement saying this be found.

✅ "never fully developed compared to the other characters in the show" needs a CITE, also "many fans" which ones and where?

✅ "Many campaigns to save the character were created after the announcement." a few examples would be nice.

✅ "since he and Brad Wright had already discussed the change." needs a CITE.

Reception
Bit on the small side and only seems to focus on his "Bring back" campaign, which whilst important, doesn't really tell us why people wanted him back. Does "F.O.R.D." still exist somewhere?
 * I can't seem to find anything else!
 * That should be okay, a minor character that only existed for one season. Should be fine as-is. Sanguis Sanies (talk) 21:17, 26 November 2009 (UTC)