Talk:Aimé Mpane/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 02:02, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)


 * @APK Here are my comments. Hope they can be addressed. :) Arconning (talk) 16:19, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:13, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead

 * did not go far enough., go far enough? Could probably reword this^^
 * A second sculpture was added and,, add another comma after added.
 * restore, not repair,, add quotes.
 * ✅ APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Early life

 * Aimé Mpane was born in 1968 in the modern-day, remove the.
 * after the Congo Crisis had ended,, remove comma.
 * cabinet-maker and sculptor, replace cabinet-maker with cabinetmaker or cabinet maker. Also add a comma at the end.
 * taught the Congolese, taught that the Congolese.
 * Institut Des Beaux Arts, Institut des Beaux-Arts and add a comma at the end.
 * In 1994, Mpane moved to Belgium, add a comma at the end.
 * his first award,, remove comma.
 * portrayed as a savage people, remove a.
 * ✅ APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

Career

 * Congo Free State, and the way racism has played a large role in it., remove comma and replace it with them.
 * ✅ APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

2000s

 * Wikilink first mention of Kinshasa.
 * and was featured, and were featured.
 * ✅ APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

2010s

 * in the Kinshasa, remove the.
 * Nike swoosh, replace with Nike Swoosh and just wikilink the entirety to the Swoosh.
 * 1897 Brussels International Exposition, add a comma at the end.
 * he thought Congolese should be involved in the process., he thought Congolese people should be involved in the process..
 * not looking towards the past, but the Congolese looking up, towards a brighter future., for everyone to reconcile the past instead of fighting over it., restoration rather than a repair, add quotes.
 * ✅ APK hi :-)  ( talk ) 05:34, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

2020s

 * No issues from me.

Images

 * Images have proper licenses, art works have fair use licenses which makes sense.

Refs

 * Random refs check: 7, 16, 23. Yep good.
 * Earwig picks up "violation unlikely"!
 * Manual check seems great.

Misc.

 * No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information about the topic.