Talk:Ain't No Other Man/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:12, 26 June 2013 (UTC)


 * General
 * One dead link


 * Info box
 * Apply the flat list template for the formats, genres, writers and producers.
 * Genres should be alphabetical
 * Shouldn't really have references for the sources in the info box. They should be sourced in the composition section.
 * ✅ The references were added by an IP. HĐ (talk) 09:46, 27 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * artist Christina Aguilera, taken from her fifth → artist Christina Aguilera for her fifth
 * done by Aguilera and Premier among with Roane. → done by Aguilera, Premier and Roane.
 * Why are there refs for the genres here, aren't they sourced in the composition? If yes, then don't do it here.
 * You say it's a soul song, then go onto say it contains elements of soul? Bit confusing.
 * At the 2007 Grammy Award, → Shouldn't it be Awards? She wasn't inside an award lol
 * Commercially, "Ain't No Other Man" was a commercial success; → Repetition of commercial and a derivative of very close after.
 * ✅ The references of the genres were added by an IP. HĐ (talk) 09:46, 27 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and recording
 * Following the release of Stripped (2002) which took creation over the musical style of Aguilera, → What? This makes no sense at all. The album took creation over her??
 * Aguilera explained that the break in her career took lots of her time, so she had a lot more to say about what happened to her life during that time. → She later explained that the her lengthy break allowed her to write a lot about what she had experienced during that time.


 * Development and writing
 * On "Ain't No Other Man", Aguilera worked with DJ Premier. → Aguilera worked with DJ Premier on "Ain't No Other Man".
 * make a jazz-influence material like that. → make similar jazz-influenced material.
 * The block quote shouldn't have "" at the start and end.
 * During the writing process, the song was inspired by Aguilera's marriage with Jordan Bratman, which happened recently in 2005. → Aguilera was inspired by her 2005 marriage to Jordan Bratman during the writing process.
 * liked → ?


 * Composition
 * Again, you say it's a soul song, followed by elements of soul. It's either a soul song, or a song with soul elements.


 * Critical reception
 * Might as well tack the third, two sentence, paragraph onto the end of the second paragraph.
 * I don't understand much what you mean here?


 * Music video
 * I did a slight c/e on this
 * Thanks HĐ (talk) 09:46, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

On hold until Sunday. I am going on holiday soon as please do this ASAP. — AARON  &bull; TALK   23:04, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * Passing. —  AARON  &bull; TALK   10:32, 27 June 2013 (UTC)