Talk:Air Combat/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:45, 10 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 20:03, 11 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "Air Combat[a] is..." never keen on such an intrusive footnote, could you say "Air Combat (also known as Ace Combat in Japan)[A]..."?
 * Per WP:VG/JP, the Japanese name should be kept as a footnote, unless it's written in kanji and therefore requires explanation (which this one doesn't).
 * "in the country of Usea" -> "in the fictional country of Usea"
 * Corrected
 * "fightercraft"' say what? Do you mean an "aircraft" or a "fighter aircraft"" or a "fighter"?
 * I've seen "fightercraft" be used before, but I changed it to "aircraft".
 * "arcade hardware" no need for "arcade".
 * Removed
 * "shipped 2.23 million copies" worldwide I presume.
 * Yeah, worldwide sales. Noted.
 * Shouldn't the release date for mobile phone (2005) be reflected in the infobox?
 * I've never really been a fan of listing multiple release dates for a game in a single infobox, since more often than not it gets cluttered. I chose to just keep the PlayStation version's release date since that is the original version of the game.
 * No reason for "n.a." in fields in the fair use image licensing, that needs to be remedied.
 * "the country of Usea" again, add "fictional".
 * Done
 * "and stealth aircraft" why not say which one?
 * Removed pipelink
 * "powered System 21 arcade" link System 21.
 * Done
 * Link "port".
 * Done
 * "allow ... allow" repetitive.
 * Removed second instance
 * "in Japan on June 30, 1995.[9] It was released " -> in Japan on June 30, 1995, and on September 9 in the United States as...
 * I actually disagree with this idea. I've chosen to specify it was titled Ace Combat in Japan in the first sentence, and I think the second sentence leading into the American and European dates is fine.
 * "on August 25, 2005 for" comma after 2005.
 * Done
 * "did Allgame's " AllGame.
 * Done
 * "console.[19][16]" order.
 * Done
 * "cutscenes,[19][16] realistic sound effects,[14][17][13][19] and amount" similar, twice.
 * Done
 * Ref 14 should have spaced en-dash, not spaced hyphen in the tite.
 * Added
 * That should be it. Thanks for reviewing. Namcokid  47  00:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * the fair use rationale is still complete for the screenshot. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 07:51, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Done. Namcokid  47  15:11, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Good stuff, promoting now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 15:49, 12 March 2021 (UTC)