Talk:Air India/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:07, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

Will review. It is great to work with you again! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Talk all words 10:07, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Will work on the article!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 11:30, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Have made all the changes!Magentic Manifestations (talk) 14:51, 6 March 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Please shift the citations to the main text✅
 * Link and introduce J.R.D. Tata✅
 * Link air mail✅
 * later continuing to Madras Add that Chennai is the modern name.✅
 * was renamed to Air-India Say "Air India" throughout the article✅
 * attempts were made to privatise Air India and in 2006 onwards, it suffered losses after its merger with Indian Airlines. --> attempts were made to privatise Air India; from 2006 onwards, it suffered losses after its merger with Indian Airlines.✅

Early years (1932–1945)

 * Add a word about who Tata was✅
 * Link air mail✅
 * Add that Chennai is the modern name.✅
 * Who is Vincent?✅
 * flew 160,000 miles, carrying 155 passengers and 10.71 ton of mail and made a profit of 60,000 rupees Use convert templates✅
 * Duplinks: Puss Moth aircraft, Karachi, Bombay✅

Post Independence (1946–2000)

 * Many parts are unsourced✅
 * public limited company Can we have any link here?✅
 *  After the Indian independence --> After the independence of India in 1947✅
 * Links or explanations for terms like VT-CQP throughout this section? (Pls suggest; already included that it is registration number)
 * Duplinks:Lockheed Constellation L-1049, Delhi✅

Later years (2000–)

 * the then managing director with corruption --> the then managing director, with corruption✅
 * convert templates needed in some places✅
 * BJP and the CPI(M) links✅
 * 20 per cent growth  Say % or per cent throughout the article✅
 * Air India Ltd  Say either Ltd or Limited throughout the article✅
 * Link FY✅
 * Duplinks: Indian Airlines, Star Alliance, Civil Aviation Minister✅

Corporate affairs and identity

 * Air India Limited, Indian, JRD Tata are duplinks✅
 * Source for Subsidiaries?✅
 * When was the mascot created?✅
 * Air India's then commercial director When is "then"?✅
 * Air India's then commercial director Bobby Kooka, and Umesh Rao, an artist with J. Walter Thompson Ltd, created it. --> It was created by Bobby Kooka, the then commercial director of Air India, and Umesh Rao, an artist with J. Walter Thompson Ltd.✅
 * The air planes were earlier named after... old scheme was returned. Source?✅
 *  the chakra  Explain chakra✅
 * What are nacelles✅

Destinations

 *  across 4 continents 4 in words ✅

Fleet

 * As of 03,2016 Write properly✅
 * It is information not info✅
 * One full para is unsourced✅
 * Prime Minister of India, President of India or the Vice President of India Why repeat "of India"?✅
 *  The 18 737s can cause confusion✅
 * Towards the end, two duplinks: De Havilland Puss Moth, Boeing 707✅

Services

 * There are eight Maharaja Lounges: Source?✅
 *  Air India serves meals on all domestic and international flights. Source?✅
 *  same 3 class configuration  3-->three. Look out for similar instances✅
 * Thales i3000 link✅
 * Shubh Yatra is a bilingual magazine  Italics✅
 * Duplinks: Boeing 747-400, Airbus A320, Hindi, English, Boeing 777-200LR, 777-300ER, 747-400 and 787✅

Awards and recognitions

 * The Mercury Award from the International Flight Catering Association for finest in-flight catering services (1994, 2003) Source? ✅
 *  Air India became the first all-jet airline in June 1962. Air India's security department became the first aviation security organisation in the world to acquire ISO 9002 certification on 31 January 2001. Source?✅

Accidents and incidents

 * and en route from Karachi to Bombay "and" not needed. Check for similar cases in the rest of the section✅
 * Many listed incidents have no source✅