Talk:Air India Express Flight 1344/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 05:01, 3 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Hello Saha, I'll be taking up this nomination's review which I will present shortly. I hope my feedback will be of use to you and that I get to learn something new in the process. Tayi Arajakate  Talk 05:01, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , I've completed the review. The article is close to a good one but there is one major problem in that it is incomplete in a lot of aspects. I'm putting this on hold for the time being in order for them to be resolved There are also some other minor issues which should be easy to solve. Feel free to ask if you have any questions or concerns. Tayi Arajakate  Talk 06:00, 4 July 2021 (UTC)

Assessment
 Comprehension: The comprehension is adequate.

Verifiability: The article is mostly verifiable.

Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive enough.

Neutrality: The article adequately follows neutral point of view.

Stability: The article is stable. Illustration: The article is appropiately illustrated.



Comments
Tayi Arajakate Talk 05:30, 4 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The article needs some copyediting, there are grammatical mistakes here and there. Some of the references need fixing as well, they are missing authors or have auto-generated titles.
 * ✅.  Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 09:41, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Aviation Safety Network is a tertiary source, consider replacing it with secondary sources. The source itself provides citations for its material which could be use instead.
 * ✅. For Aircraft details, it can be considered as secondary. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 16:14, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The citation for the third line under background states sufficient hours are required only for night.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 16:14, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Ranganathan's concerns aren't adequately summarised in the second paragraph. It contains information which isn't present in the citation and doesn't have others which are.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:25, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The line regarding the airport being a tabletop runway could also be included in the first paragraph instead, the Hindustan Times and The Hindu citation contains information regarding this, it isn't attributed to Ranganathan.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 07:45, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The PIL belongs in aftermath and could be expanded upon.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 14:17, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The section concerning victims is incomplete. Some of them died later, and there are details surrounding about the victims. Sathe's state funeral should be included in this section as well.
 * ✅ <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 14:08, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Compensation should be merged with victims, the two sections are very small and can be expanded to include a more detailed account of the victims and reporting around them.
 * ✅. Victim details were very limited. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 16:14, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The article contains no information on the pilots association's response to the accident.
 * ✅. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 09:28, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The last line under investigation is OR, please remove it and instead consider including concerns raised regarding the investigation itself, many of the citations report on it.
 * ✅. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 18:55, 14 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Hi . I have an issue with my PC for the last few weeks. I have ordered a replacement for the faulty component and its expected to reach in few days. Can you kindly extend the Holding Period? I find it very hard to edit in mobile. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 07:12, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , of course. I can extend it till the end of this month if you need time. Tayi Arajakate  Talk 07:29, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I have tried to solve the issues. Please check. <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF"> Stay safe  </b> </b> 19:25, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , I've gone through the article for a second time and I think most of the issues are fixed. The prose still needs some improvement but otherwise it more or less appears fulfills the good article criteria so I'm going to promote it. Good work on it and congratulations on the successful GAN! Tayi Arajakate  Talk 08:22, 15 July 2021 (UTC)
 * thanks a lot <b style="border:1px solid black"> <b style="color:#FF0000">Saha</b> ❯❯❯ <b style="color:#0043AF">  Stay safe  </b> </b> 09:25, 15 July 2021 (UTC)