Talk:Air Mata Iboe

Informal PR
No ties or jackets were worn for this PR. A nicely put together piece, with not too much to worry me, but the following comments may help

IB
 * Njoo Cheong Seng is linked twice
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Dutch East Indies is linked on the second mention, not the first
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Lead
 * "is a 1941 film"; if it is lost it should be "was a 1941 film"
 * Have used this for the past film articles as well; it may be, but short of confirmation I'd rather not go past tense. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Plot
 * "three sons (Achmad [Rd Ismail], Idris [S Poniman], Soemadi [Ali Sarosa])" I was a bit lost with all the brackets going on. Perhaps: "three sons: Achmad (Rd Ismail), Idris (S Poniman) and Soemadi (Ali Sarosa), and a daughter..." or "three sons—Achmad (Rd Ismail), Idris (S Poniman) and Soemadi (Ali Sarosa)—and a daughter..."
 * How's this? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Perfect, cheers - SchroCat (talk) 09:24, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Production
 * "Soebagio catches ill" -> "Soebagio falls ill"
 * Done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Anything from the sources on the shape of the revenge?
 * Nope. Stops just at the teaser. Doubt it would have been anything too violent, considering the censorship of the time. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * "over 55 reels had been shot, with another 60 sound reels." This could be a bit smoother – but I'm not sure how at the moment!
 * As well as? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * You have troup here and troupe a couple of times below
 * Fixed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Release Hope these help! Cheers – SchroCat (talk) 08:51, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * You seem to be using BrEng, but then drop Theater on us?
 * That's what I get for being raised in Windsor! Fixed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks, SchroCat! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

Remake
Does it survive? Brutannica (talk) 19:18, 10 December 2017 (UTC)

Two citations cases
I am unable to purchase the offline sources cited, plus Soerabaijasch Handelsblad is a dead link, only the Filmindonesia one, so I'm taking it here if or other editors with offline access can address this. This article has multiple citations cited at the same place (i.e "I betrayed my wife and married a cricket.[1][2]" They are:


 * "Production" paragraph 1
 * "Production" paragraph 2 sentence 1-2
 * "Production" paragraph 3 sentence 2 part 2

Apart from that, this featured article is slowly getting.... un-featured. I removed a "received positive reviews" claim in the lead since there's no talks on the film's reviews, almost all online sources are dead, and I removed a confusing "for the company" fragment from "...which also had a tragic ending, for the company." A lot of FAs in the early days of WP are also kinda troubled, so it would be great if this is managed.  Gerald WL  10:19, 22 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I don't recall multiple refs in the same place being an issue at FA, if both are used to cite specific information within the preceding sentence(s). The reference formatting has remained unchanged since this article was first featured.
 * As for the courtesy links to the archive, they have been fixed. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 20:06, 23 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , usually if appropriate and if not space-taking, it's common practice to relocate citations after the claim it specifically talked about. I'm just noting; this of course doesn't apply if it adds more vague bytes or is just impossible to be implemented. If I were you, I would bundle the references, which would statistically save more bytes. These are just, ofc, me throwing tips.
 * Thanks for addressing the issue. As I said above, a lot of old FAs are starting to rot in terms of links, perhaps even content, and there's gonna be a lot of work to do. Just reminds that Wikipedia is far from over.
 * Anyways, cheers, and Merry Christmas if you're celebrating.  Gerald  WL  21:53, 23 December 2020 (UTC)