Talk:Airport Central railway station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 03:07, 22 January 2023 (UTC)


 * This is a great article; nice work! I have placed it one hold for now and left some comments below. Please ping me once you have addressed my concerns so that I can know when to reevaluate. Thanks!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 03:54, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
 * I've addressed everything. Steelkamp (talk) 06:24, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the fast response! I am now pleased to pass this article for GA status. Congrats!  𓃦 LunaEatsTuna  (💬) 06:27, 22 January 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go. No concerns from me either. Quotations used in-line with WP:COPYQUOTE.

Files
All images are relevant, high quality and copyright-free:
 * : CC-BY-SA 4.0, taken by nominator;
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 * : CC-BY-SA 4.0, uploaded to Commons by registered user;
 * : CC-BY-SA 4.0, taken by nominator.

Cheers for all the images!

Prose

 * "On the concourse are fare gates, toilets, and a staff office." – I may be being picky here, but this seems like an excessive amount of detail. I would assume all airport stations have these. Alternatively, perhaps it could be rephrased as "On the concourse are the fare gates and utilities." or something similar.
 * Done.
 * "There are also two emergency staircases at either end of the platform, and two emergency staircases from the concourse, which all lead to external ground level." – same concerns as above. The public links to the three levels seem notable to me, but mentioning all the emergency exists is fairly intricate detailing.
 * I've removed that entire sentence.
 * "and an original musical score." – do the sources say by whom?
 * Unfortunately I could not find any information on this.
 * That is indeed unfortunate.
 * "There is also artwork along the walls and travellators designed by Jade Dolman and Crispian Warrell of Nani Creative." – located throughout the station? Also:
 * Clarified.
 * Wikilink travellators
 * Done.
 * "The station's design was released on 28 May 2017." – elaborate; where/how was this released?
 * It was released online and at a press conference I think. I don't think this is detail that is necessary.
 * Fair enough; I agree.
 * "70% complete" – change to "70 percent complete" per WP:%.
 * Done.
 * "a division of the PTA." – I would unabbreviate PTA.
 * Done.
 * "The station is predicted to have average daily boardings of 6,100," – any updates since opening?
 * No. There is no routine release of station patronage data so the only hope is that if patronage is particularly good, the government will release it to show off.
 * I see!

Refs
All sources used are RS. Passes spotcheck—no concerns with refs 2, 7, 15, 16, 20, 31, 37, 40, 50 or 53. Nice work!

Other
Infobox, short description, WP:ALT text, navs, cats and other templates good.


 * The amount of YouTube URLs in External links is quite excessive. At most I think only URLs 1, 3 and 4 could be kept if any.
 * I've removed all the Youtube URLS except for the station animation.