Talk:Airport racial profiling in the United States

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The first sentence talks about government activity generally rather than specifically identifying what happens when someone is racially profiled at an airport.Marlenefine (talk) 16:52, 1 April 2011 (UTC)

I enjoyed this article a lot - but I agree with Prof Fine, that the initial statement is too general, considering the information provided. Cdjsuarez (talk) 16:58, 3 April 2011 (UTC)

Good article- some suggestions: In the "In the United States" section, saying "our nation" is not objective.

The sentence in this section that begins "Despite..." could maybe be re-phrased- it's a little awkward.

Under the "Legality" section, the first sentence is posed as a question, which is a little awkward. Caleylynch4 (talk) 23:44, 4 April 2011 (UTC)

I noticed the same as Caley. The question reads a bit awkward but overall great article. Michelle.K.Rico (talk) 14:12, 6 April 2011 (UTC)

Hey Denise, great article. NasroF (talk) 20:29, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

Great job on the article the only suggestion I would have would be to talk about how it could change within the next couple months. Symons2 —Preceding undated comment added 04:03, 6 May 2011 (UTC).

Updates needed
The most recent incident or quote is 2010, and a lot has happened in racial profiling since then. Little Will (talk) 14:23, 16 September 2016 (UTC)

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