Talk:Aishwarya Rai Bachchan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 03:36, 9 April 2011 (UTC)


 * I apologize. I am not going to review this until the weekend. I am doing my taxes.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 16:21, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Please add one paragraph to the WP:LEAD that summarizes the article after the filmography text.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:21, 15 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Early life
 * Several facts need dates. Do we know what dates
 * She attended Arya Vidya Mandir
 * She attended Jai Hind College
 * She attended Ruparel College
 * She gave up architecture
 * She began modelling


 * Miss World
 * Please address the citation needed tag.
 * Other facts also need citations.


 * Early career (1997–98)
 * "was also panned by critics." needs a citation.


 * Success (1999–2002)
 * "The film became her first box office success in Bollywood and earned her her first Filmfare Best Actress Award." needs a citation.
 * Link Catholic.
 * 3rd para has no citations


 * Setback (2003–05)
 * 3rd para has no citations

I apologize, but the article is missing too many citations for a more serious review. Please take the time to add inline citations to all worthwhile facts. I am quickfailing the article at this time without further review.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 15:24, 17 April 2011 (UTC)