Talk:Akadama (wine)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Xchen0417. Peer reviewers: Yobelm, Eunicejl319.

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Feedback
Wow. You've done fantastic work with this article! Please go ahead and move this to the article namespace right away. You could do more with references. Can you find any books, newspapers, magazines, etc that have written about akadama? I think that would help further establish notability and would help improve the article. Good work and good luck! — m a k o ๛  01:33, 24 October 2015 (UTC)

Hi! I think your article looks great. The only thing I would suggest is to put an image although it is unnecessary. Good luck! Eunicejl319 (talk) 18:21, 30 October 2015 (UTC)

Thank you! I'll try and see if I can add an image :) Xchen0417 (talk) 05:23, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Peer Feedback
Hi!

Sorry for the late feedback, I was still trying to figure out how to use user talk pages, and I had to familiarize myself with your topic. Your article is really good, I really enjoyed reading and learning more about Akadama wine and its backstory. The main thing that I would recommend is for you to probably link a little more to other Wikipedia articles if you can, that way people will be able to read more about things they don't particularly understand. But this article looks good and it provides a lot of interesting information for any user. I will try and go through and make some minor edits as far as grammar goes, but overall well done. Keep up the great work.

- Yobelm (talk) 18:23, 3 November 2015 (UTC)

No problems at all! Thank you for your feedback; I'll try and see if I can link it to other Wiki articles :) Xchen0417 (talk) 05:23, 8 November 2015 (UTC)