Talk:Aki Toyosaki/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewing now. Good raise  01:28, 17 September 2009 (UTC)


 * 1) Well-written: Met. However, see my first suggestion below.
 * 2) Factually accurate and verifiable: Met. (Though my close to non-existent knowledge of the Japanese language prevents me from making absolutely sure that there is no original research.)
 * 3) Broad in its coverage: Met.
 * 4) Neutral: Met.
 * 5) Stable: Met.
 * 6) Illustrated, if possible, by images: Met. (No image required, though it would be nice to see one added someday.)


 * What are "Anime Song Plus (アニソンぷらす)" and the "Hatsukoi Limited Character File Vol. 3"? I suppose they are some TV show and character song album, but I can't be sure. This needs clarification.
 * The inline comment: "Not too sure about date here" has me a little worried.

Very nice article. Good work! Passed. Good raise  06:30, 17 September 2009 (UTC)

PS: Please consider reviewing a GAN yourself. Good raise  06:30, 17 September 2009 (UTC)