Talk:Akil Thomas/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 00:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  00:36, 10 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Maybe add a bit more about his major junior career to the lead.✅
 * Add publishers to references.✅
 * "and eventually tied his career high of single game assists with a five assist night in a win over the Kingston Frontenacs. During the team's 8–4 win, Thomas also tied the franchise record for most assists in a game" The franchise record should be mentioned earlier.✅
 * For the infobox: His playing career should start at 2016 (First pro year if professional, first year of top level of amateur competition if amateur.)✅
 * "Aside from school and hockey, Thomas also runs a clothing company called Zale Apparel with friend Ethan Low." This should be mentioned in the article.✅
 * Awards and honours section needs a reference.✅

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  01:18, 12 April 2020 (UTC)