Talk:Akwasi Yeboah/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:13, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Am happy to review this article as well for the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:13, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
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 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
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Early life

 * Think you also want to state Chigwell is a suburb in London as stated by Newsday
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "His physical education teacher let him know he was not competitive," - how about told him to better pass WP:LIMITED
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The acryonms of the National Basketball League should be put in parentheses after the first full mention of it
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink points and rebounds to their respective articles for non-Basketball readers
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "and had 19 points in a 12-point" - scored
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "the 2015 National Basketball League’s Division I Playoff Championship." - NBL
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Wikilink NCAA Division I
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Stony Brook (2016–2019)

 * Wikilink the term redshirted
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "as Yeboah sat out due to lack of projected playing time." - I believe it would help to know what exactly Yeboah sat out. The entire tournament or the championship game?
 * He sat out the season. Clarified. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "He scored 21 points and had 16 rebounds in the first round of the America East Tournament against Binghamton." - This sentence is lacking a reliable source to verify it. Please address this issue
 * It was sourced to the next ref, but I added a new one. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Yeboah averaged 16.7 points and 7.7 rebounds per game as a junior for the Seawolves while shooting 41.3 percent from the floor and 31.6 percent from 3-point range." - not mentioned in the America East source. Please find another source that explicitly states this information
 * Good catch. I added a ref. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Rutgers (2019–2020)

 * "and first winning season since 2006." - and its
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "including a three pointer to tie the game at 72" - three-pointer
 * OK. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "in a 75-72 win against Nebraska on January 26, 2020" - the hyphen should be replaced by an en dash (–) per MOS:DASH
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "and surpassed the 1,500 point milestone." - 1,500-point
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

National team career

 * Wikilink assists to the relevant article for non-Basketball readers
 * Done. ~ EDDY  ( talk / contribs )~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)