Talk:Al-Adil ibn al-Sallar/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:41, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:41, 12 April 2018 (UTC)
 * just a friendly reminder :) Constantine  ✍  11:13, 27 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Which worked!


 * No DABs, external links OK
 * Image appropriately licensed.
 * vizier Ibn Masal Capitalize vizier here because it's coupled with a name, so it's now a proper noun. Used by itself, it's not and doesn't need capitalization.
 * Link Caliph on first use.
 * Overlinked vizier, Sunni Islam
 * Tell the reader that the elite mounted battalion was in the army.
 * Is there any info on what specific battles al-Sallar participated in against the Crusaders?
 * Is it worth creating a redlink for the battle where Ibn Masal was defeated?
 * In Al-Imad, why is three in all caps? If it's the volume number put it in normal case in the template.
 * Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:16, 28 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi Sturmvogel 66, apologies, this somehow fell off my radar. I'll have a look during the next few days. Thanks to BlueMoonset for his reminder. Cheers, Constantine  ✍  13:20, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I found some time, and made the requested changes or otherwise replied to your comments, Sturmvogel 66. Thanks again for taking the time, and looking forward to your further comments. Constantine  ✍  15:42, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Is it worth creating a redlink for the battle where Ibn Masal was defeated?
 * In Al-Imad, why is three in all caps? If it's the volume number put it in normal case in the template.
 * Nicely done.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:16, 28 April 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi Sturmvogel 66, apologies, this somehow fell off my radar. I'll have a look during the next few days. Thanks to BlueMoonset for his reminder. Cheers, Constantine  ✍  13:20, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I found some time, and made the requested changes or otherwise replied to your comments, Sturmvogel 66. Thanks again for taking the time, and looking forward to your further comments. Constantine  ✍  15:42, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi Sturmvogel 66, apologies, this somehow fell off my radar. I'll have a look during the next few days. Thanks to BlueMoonset for his reminder. Cheers, Constantine  ✍  13:20, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I found some time, and made the requested changes or otherwise replied to your comments, Sturmvogel 66. Thanks again for taking the time, and looking forward to your further comments. Constantine  ✍  15:42, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 * I found some time, and made the requested changes or otherwise replied to your comments, Sturmvogel 66. Thanks again for taking the time, and looking forward to your further comments. Constantine  ✍  15:42, 22 May 2018 (UTC)