Talk:Al-Amir bi-Ahkam Allah/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Al Ameer son (talk · contribs) 04:39, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Will begin review within the coming few days; made some minor copyedits, feel free to revert if unhelpful. Al Ameer (talk) 04:39, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments/Suggestions Review
I have addressed the points above. Anything else? Constantine  ✍  06:52, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Reign in the infobox?
 * Wow, how did I miss that? Added.
 * Consistency with capitalizations of Caliph and Imam ("the tenth Fatimid Caliph, and the 20th Imam of the Musta'li Isma'ili sect" and "ninth Fatimid imam-caliph, al-Musta'li")
 * Fixed.
 * Do we know the names of his mother and his wife (the daughter of al-Afdal)
 * Gibb gives the name (or rather title) Sitt al-Mulk for his mother, but I haven't been able to corroborate it. The title is otherwise treated as unique for Sitt al-Mulk, the daughter of al-Aziz. Al-Afdal's daughter is not named in my sources (would have to look into primary sources likely). Will add if I find anything.
 * "… the main preoccupation of the Fatimid state was the conflict" → "… the Fatimid state was preoccupied with the conflict"
 * Rephrased.
 * Perhaps a little more context about the "territorial losses in the previous decade" and the Nizari schism. A footnote would also suffice.
 * Done.
 * "coastal cities" → "Syrian (or Levantine) coastal cities"
 * Done.
 * Add a map showing the Crusader states/Fatimid Egypt. Al Ameer (talk) 03:17, 6 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Map added.
 * That is all. Thanks for another great article on one of the lesser known Fatimid caliphs. Al Ameer (talk) 15:57, 8 April 2023 (UTC)