Talk:Al-Fa'iz bi-Nasr Allah/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 18:24, 11 February 2023 (UTC)

Will take this on. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  18:24, 11 February 2023 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅
 * Passes spot checks   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

 * Suffering from epileptic seizures, al-Fa'iz died at the age of eleven currently merely suggests he died of a seizure, suggest Suffering from epileptic seizures, al-Fa'iz died of one at the age of eleven

Life

 * he was mutilated and killed by being beaten to death by the palace women suggest simplifying to he was mutilated and beaten to death by the palace women
 * That is all of my suggestions; a fascinating article. Passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  23:47, 11 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review and the suggestions,, they have been implemented. Constantine  ✍  07:57, 12 February 2023 (UTC)