Talk:Al-Rahba/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:08, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 07:58, 20 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * Some dablinks need to be fixed.
 * No copyvio detected


 * Rahbat Malik ibn Tawk
 * Wikilink Bedouin
 * with the arrival in 942 of I think "in 942 with the arrival of" reads better
 * Al-Basisiri's revolt ultimately failed I think you mean "Al-Basasiri"?


 * Architecture
 * The citadel of al-Rahba is described by Bylinski  You need to introduce Bylinski to the reader.


 * Thanks for taking this nomination Sainsf. I fixed the issues above. --Al Ameer (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Happy to promote this. Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 10:33, 21 June 2016 (UTC)