Talk:Al Khawalid

Some comments
Per request:

I've done some copyediting throughout, though I was moving quickly and probably haven't caught everything.

Two other minor points:
 * "They are descendants of Khalid bin Ali Al Khalifa" --Al Khawalid, Al Khalifa family, or both?
 * The Osama bin Laden comparison may be a bit weak and inflammatory for the lead, though it seems reasonable in the context of the body

Thanks for your work on this one! As always, you've done a heck of a job with your research. -- Khazar2 (talk) 00:06, 22 July 2013 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your copyedits and nice words. As for your question, Al Khawalid are descendants of Khalid. Al Khalifa as the name implies are descendants of Khalifa. I've clarified it in the article and removed that line from lead. Cheers.  Mohamed CJ  (talk)  12:49, 22 July 2013 (UTC)

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