Talk:Al Mashaaer Al Mugaddassah Metro line

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First sentence doesn't make sense
The first paragraph is one sentence: "The Al Mashaaer Al Mugaddassah Metro Southern Line, .... is complementing the under construction of Mecca Metro and running operation in 7 days a year exclusively for Hajj pilgrim and planned not connected to the four metro line of Mecca Metro." which does not make much sense in English. I suspect this should be 3 sentences and should be something like:

"The Al Mashaaer Al Mugaddassah Metro Southern Line, .... ????verb needed???? the Mecca Metro which is currently (as of ???? date needed) under construction. It only runs for 7 days a year exclusively for the use of Hajj pilgrims. It is not planned to connect this line to the other four Mecca Metro lines."

Can someone who understands what the author is trying to say please correct the English here TiffaF (talk) 20:34, 12 March 2016 (UTC)
 * I've had a go at fixing it. Wheeltapper (talk) 21:00, 13 March 2016 (UTC)

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