Talk:Alan Moore/Archive 1

Plagiarism?
A user called "L." has removed a passage I wrote in the section on From Hell which connected Gull's statement that he had "delivered" the twentieth century with the conception of Hitler depected earlier in the book, because the use of the phrase "simple arithmetic", unconsciously lifted from a source cited in the references, apparently constitutes "plagiarism". The connection between the two was an important part of my interpretation of the book, so I have reinstated it, rewritten to avoid the offending phrase. However I consider "plagiarism", for a matter of two words, to be an outrageous accusation and would appreciate a retraction. --Nicknack009 8 July 2005 17:37 (UTC)


 * I'm afraid I myself have been successfully accused of plagiarism for unconciously printing two words together that were also from another source (the words were "flabby weight" and, ironically, also concern Hitler). I'm afraid I had to agree with them - Wiki contributors must hold themselves to an extremely high standard. Moreover, there is no place here for hurt feelings and egos. --L. 9 July 2005 14:50 (UTC)

Should there be mention of the sinister ducks? -FZ 21:44, 13 Aug 2004 (UTC)

I've reworked the article a little to remove some redundancy. I don't think that Supreme or 1963 can be considered major works, and the sections on the "interim" and ABC duplicate earlier sections, so I've merged these parts into Career History. I've also added subheadings for From Hell and Promethea under major works, to be filled in when I (or anyone else) has the time. --Nicknack009 19:43, 7 Apr 2005 (UTC)

I disagree about Supreme not being a major work. It (along with the precurser, 1963, which I'll concede is not one of his major projects) introduced a completly new era in his writing style, and a brand new way to look at superhero books. It's one of his most innovative projects, and just as clever in its way as the grim and gritty books. I put it back in.

--Scott Dubin

Fair enough. I think its more notable in the context of the evolution of his work rather than a great piece of work per se, but maybe I'm a bit biased against superheroes. --Nicknack009 17:32, 8 Apr 2005 (UTC)


 * I just stumbled on to this article, and I was shocked at its superb quality! I am nominating it for a Featured article. Good work everyone! Gkhan 17:41, Apr 16, 2005 (UTC)

I think that the Sinister Ducks are worth a brief mention, though I may be biased because it was my comment. It's not like it's mentioning an unimportant comic he wrote - musical work is a complete deviation from the rest of his body of work and hence worth a mention.

Yeah, but is his Sinister Ducks stuff professional quality, or just a hobby level thing? I'm not sure that a hobby project would rank. How many people have listened to it, have you? Scott Dubin

The Sinister Ducks are definately of professional quality. I have MP3s of both March of the Sinister Ducks and Old Gansters Never Die, and they're both songs which I would love even if they weren't related to Alan Moore.


 * I haven't decided upon how/where to add a mention to this article for The Sinister Ducks, but I think it definitely warrants inclusion. The band members were Alan Moore, Alex Green and David J, and it appears to have had an actual release as a 45rpm record.  I have some other things to add to this article as well, when I have time, hopefully well-referenced.

Photo
Surely there's a photo that doesn't look quite so much like Ian Anderson on a bad day...?

Have you ever seen the pictures of himself that he puts on the books? I don't think Alan Moore is really that interested in looking like GQ cover.

Also, on the topic of David J, you should change that he is an "ex-member" of Bauhaus, as they (David and all of the original members) are currently on tour.

There's a picture fo him that looks a little more appealing, walking on a street with a cane. Kidney Stone 12:58, 11 March 2006 (UTC)


 * The current photo does look a bit old. I'd be in favour of replacing it with a more up-to-date one. Also, there is a pretty cool picture of Alan Moore by Bryan Talbot here . Maybe it could be included if the copyright status could be worked out. It's a parody of the famous Allister Crowley picture so it fits in nicely with the stuff about Moore's belief in magic. Iron Ghost 00:20, 12 March 2006 (UTC)

References and stuff
In response to the denial of featured article status, I've added some references and put more detail into the bibliography. There's not, as far as I know, a great body of critical writing about comics, so most of the information about his work comes from reading the comics themselves. In which case, publication details of the comics will have to be the bulk of our references. --Nicknack009 23:16, 22 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Eyes & Ears
The article used to say that Moore is blind in one eye & deaf in one ear. I've heard this before, but it's now removed from the article. Is it true, and if so where should it go?


 * The only source I've seen for this is this interview, in which the man himself says he's "practically deaf" in one ear and "practically blind" in one eye.  ←Hob 00:19, August 19, 2005 (UTC)

This is actually true. Reason why he doesn't drive, etc. For a reference see the book, "The Extraordinary Works of Alan Moore", edited by George Khoury, TwoMorrows Press 2003. I believe one of his daughters mentions it in either the foreword or afterword.

Anarchist?
Someone added Category:Anarchist. Can anyone back this up? Marc Mywords 07:28, 30 September 2005 (UTC)
 * Alan Moore can. Sarge Baldy 00:31, 23 March 2006 (UTC)

Retirement
After he finishes promithea 34 hadn't he said he was done with ABC and would soon retire now thats he's 50?
 * Cool, maybe that way someone else will do a Watchmen sequel. Yeah Mr. Moore, please retire! 168.243.218.2

Last time I spoke to him he was talking about retirment. I put it to him that a writer can never retire not propally. He agreed and rephased his statement to say that he would slow down his output. That was about 4 years ago in 2002. I seariously doubt he will dissapear in a hurry. Andham2000

Occult
I seem to remember reading a number of rather odd pieces by Moore in which he refers to various occult practices he has performed. The article doesn't seem to cover this aspect of his life. Does anyone know anything about it? Leithp (talk) 14:44, 27 November 2005 (UTC)
 * He sure as hell is. His album The Highbury Working is all about performance of a ritual. A "working" is a magical ritual. Semiconscious 07:41, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

He worships a snake too, doesn't he?

Alan Moore contributed an article about the history of The Moon and Serpent Theater of Marvels and the worship of Glycon (a snake sock puppet that performs faith healings and cons the wealthy out of their jewels) in Joel Biroco's KAOS magazine, available here: http://www.biroco.com/kaos/

St Pancras Panda?
I note no mention in the "early work" section of the 1970s "St Pancras Panda" series, written and illustrated by Moore for Oxfords's Back Street Bugle magazine. In its thirteen episodes, our cuddly hero was, in his own words, "shanghied by furriers, kidnapped by cultists, browbeaten by bears, got at by gangsters, abducted by aliens" before getting a dose of relgion and being sent to meet his maker. Alas the series was never completed - Moore was offered work that paid actual money - and the eponymous panda was thus abandonned over 25 years ago in "Northampton - an accident black spot - where there is much wailing and gnashing of teeth". The "Penultimate Panda, Panky's Inferno" never appeared. Nick Levine 19:57, 23 December 2005 (UTC)

Bibliography?
Is the work 'bibliography' appropriate to describe Moores books, audio recordings, and films? I guess I thought 'bibliography' was somewhat specific to books. Would it make sense to title this section 'creative works' or 'published creative works'? ike9898 19:18, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

Bibliography is OK for all written works but not films or recordings. The other problem is that Moore has publicly disavowed any involvement with most of the films on the list. Iron Ghost 20:12, 30 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Please see this diff to compared my proposed re-organization to what was there. Feel free to modify. ike9898 21:54, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

That seems fine to me. Iron Ghost 22:39, 30 January 2006 (UTC)

I first came across The Courtyard as a short story in an HP Lovecraft tribute put out by Creation Books, The Starry Wisdom ISBN 184060873, copyright 1994, reprinted 1996, new edition 2003. Alan Moore also has a contribution in The Thackery T. Lambshead Pocket Guide to Eccentric and Discredited Diseases ISBN 1892389541, hardcover edition.

The Culture Show
Alan Moore gave a rare television interview on BBC 2's The Culture Show this evening (09/03/2006). The interview is avalible at. It may be of some use. Iron Ghost 19:35, 9 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I added a direct link in to the video as part of the interview links. I have passed it round elsewhere and some people from outside of the UK report that it won't let them view it which is unfortunate? Should I flag it up as such, remove the liink or...? I'd imagine a proxy server should get around this restriction but still. (Emperor 17:33, 10 March 2006 (UTC))


 * It's on youtube for those outwith that area, but I'd suggest noting that it's geographically protected. Stx 22:26, 10 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Also, it's only available for a seven-day period after the actual broadcast, so probably best to remove it


 * It's also worth noting that the version of the interview on the bbc website has been abridged, whereas, the youtube version is the full interview as it appeared on TV. Iron Ghost 00:28, 11 March 2006 (UTC)

Patrick Moore?
When I heard Alan Moore refer to Sir Patrick Moore as his uncle on last nights Culture Show I assumed that he was joking. However I notice that the information has already been incorporated into the article as a fact. Was I the only one who thought that it was a joke? Perhap this fact should be checked. Iron Ghost 00:56, 10 March 2006 (UTC)
 * I agree with Iron Ghost. I'd like to see another source other than a possible script in-joke. Stx 22:24, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

I can't find a single reference to the supposed connection between Alan and Patrick Moore anywhere else on the internet and I'm sure someone would have picked up on this before, if it were true. As such I'm removing the reference to Patrick Moore from the article. If corroboroting evidence is found it can always be reinserted. Iron Ghost 23:52, 10 March 2006 (UTC)


 * So Patrick Moore-related sentences keep appearing, disappearing and re-appearing in this article...! Personally, I am convinced that it was a joke and should appear in a "Trivia" section, if at all. Mattmm 23:16, 11 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Yeah, the same thing is happening on the Patrick Moore page, but hey, that's Wikipedia folks! My feeling is that if there is no corrobaroting evidence it shouldn't be in the article at all. After all trivia still has to be true. Iron Ghost 01:13, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Well... the sentence as it currently stands is more or less true - "In an interview on The Culture Show, he claimed that his uncle is British astronomer Patrick Moore." - at least, if you replace "claimed" with "joked". True, that is, but not very significant... Mattmm 11:56, 12 March 2006 (UTC)


 * The thing is, that if it is a joke, it really isn't even significant enough to appear in a trivia section. It certainly shouldn't be in the introduction. People use Wikipedia as a source of reliable information. It's hard to see this article ever achieving featured status while it has this quality of infomation in it. Iron Ghost 16:33, 12 March 2006 (UTC)
 * Sadly I can't find this online, but in his script for The League of Extraordinary Men, he describes two planets for the artist, and offers a visual refernece 'in my Uncle Patrick Moore's book..."
 * I think this page was contained in the collected graphic novel version, if anybody is a better sleuth than me and can find... Of course, it might be another example of him joking. 2600:8804:5609:E800:AD3E:6F66:6D8B:2E9B (talk) 03:36, 28 March 2023 (UTC)

A practicing magician?
To be a magician needn't there be results of one's magic? Otherwise he would be a fumbling magician (joking). Is being a magician considered a matter of faith, as in "a practicing christian" for instance? I would propose to remove it or give it the correct name. Thoughts? Rigmarole 15:10, 3 April 2006 (UTC)


 * No, there need be only the practice of the magic, not the results. Moore does engage in magical rites, so he is a practicing magician. Jessnevins 10:55, 9 April 2006 (UTC)

Bibliograhy tidy up
The comics bibliogrpahy needs a bit of a tidy. I'm also helping tidy up the Grant Morrison and Garth Ennis entries with the plan to initially tidy things up, expand areas and get all the dates right and then arrange things in a more chronological order (the books and audio are the comics aren't). So I'll be working away on that - at least the first stage. (Emperor 03:32, 27 May 2006 (UTC))


 * I'm usnure dividing it up along company grounds is very useful as the main section describes his work for different companies (and the disputes) and it makes it difficult to work through the list in any kind of order as it jumps around so much. Thoughts? (Emperor 00:23, 28 May 2006 (UTC))


 * I'll explain what I was thinking when I did it and leave it up to y'all to decide ... when thinking of the career of Alan Moore, I do think that the different periods have distinctly different interests. The titles he did for Image is considered largely, if not entirely, disposable by most fans.  I don't think it's the place of a source of information to ignore the period entirely, because people should be aware of it if they want to know it, but to create an entire mixed list actually seemed, to me, to make the information people would want more obscured.  It seemed to me like DC could largely be described by "DC Universe", "V For Vendetta", "Watchmen", and the "Swamp Thing" books ... but if you kept the stories arranged by book, would you file all the stories collected in "DC Universe" together, or would you cite each one seperately and then put "reprinted in 'DC Universe' book (at which point, the question becomes, "What else is reprinted in there?").  And the early stuff is largely for completists only (actually, I think it might not even be fully complete; I'm pretty sure I didn't put in all the stuff, missing some short stories along the way.


 * Anyway, I'll abide by whatever you guys decide. Even though I generally do see the logic to the straight-alphabetical listing, in this specific case, it actually seemed (to me) to be more beneficial for accessing the information people would be most interested in.  Sorry, didn't mean to cause trouble
 * ThatGuamGuy 04:30, 3 June 2006 (UTC)Sean (TGG)


 * See my thinking is that a straight alphabetically listing is probably not the best way to go and I'm suggesting sorting things chronologically (see also the comments on the Grant Morrison and Garth Ennis entries. If you did that the various periods would emerge but you'd also get extra pluses (seeing the transitions between those phases) without some of the minuses (the classifcation nightmare of somehow having Marvelman in early British work and V in DC - not that there is good solution within the current framework). At the moment I'm not that bothered as long as the bibliography keeps getting tidied up and dates and the like are added so if/when it gets sorted chronoligically it'll all be much easier. (Emperor 17:08, 3 June 2006 (UTC))


 * I can dig you; I put "V" there because it seemed as if the entries were based on the trade paperbacks, not the original printings, and the trade was (of course) DC when it was finished ... which also points to one of the complications of a chronological listing, especially with somebody like Moore; 'V For Vendetta' took five years or so to actually finish ... 'Lost Girls' was first published almost 15 years ago, and has been worked on on and off since then, and is now coming out as a trade ... I don't even totally understand 'Glory', but it was apparently written more than a decade ago, published two issues, and stopped; maybe it'll be finished one day. Moore wrote 'The Killing Joke' as a favor to a friend at DC, but because the art took so long, it wound up being published more than a year after Moore had bitterly left the company.
 * I want to say, I do totally see your points about the limitation of the format I implemented (a possible [temporary?] solution to the specific V example would adding this to "Early British Work":


 * Warrior:
 * ''V For Vendetta: issues 1-26 (later collected, and completed, under DC comics)
 * Miracleman: issues 1-18, 20-21 (later reprinted in Miracleman issues 1-7, collected in A Dream of Flying and The Red King Syndrome)
 * note that The Yesterday Gambit from Warrior #4 was never collected, but was later re-written into a different Miracleman story.
 * #9-10 Warpsmith: Cold War, Cold Warrior (later reprinted in Axel Pressbutton #2
 * #16 Christmas on Depravity (originally printed in Sounds Magazine, 12/26/81)


 * Just an idea ... anyway, I'll work on the dates some more next time I'm at work, because I do think that information is imporant, I just don't know that it should neccessarily be the primary sorting tool overall (even though, in this case, I did do some of that just because so much of his work can be easily categorized that way; I personally would vote for straight-alphabetical over straight-chronological, but I thought some sort of compromise made sense in the Moore listing for the reasons I mentioned above. With Moore, it's difficult to figure out the easiest way to arrange all the information for maximum clarity...

ThatGuamGuysean


 * That is just making things worse ;) . You can't list strips from anthologies under the actual anthology (just think of how that would work for the 2000 AD entries). Its fine as it is for now. The fact that it took a while to complete isn't an issue - a lot of series stretch over long periods of time and it doesn't cause a problem putting things in chronological order - it just goes under the first publication date (Emperor 16:02, 5 June 2006 (UTC))


 * No, I understand how they'd be arranged, I was saying those quirks of publication, which are quite numerous in Moore's case, make it difficult for the flow ... I mean, if people wind up wanting it chronological, that's fine, it just seems to me like people would be more likely to scan a Garth Ennis bibliography looking for a full list of all his Punisher works together, rather than wanting to find out whether 'Pride and Joy' was published just before 'Unknown Soldier' or just after.
 * ThatGuamGuy 04:49, 6 June 2006 (UTC)sean (TGG)

Glycon
From what I can tell, Moore was joking when he said that he worshipped Glycon. Does anyone disagree? I want to rewrite it so that it is more apparent that he was joking. - Xtreme680 17:12, 27 May 2006 (UTC)


 * It is not clear whether he was joking or not. The current wording says only that he claimed to have worshiped Glycon, which is true. I vote to leave it as it is. Iron Ghost 22:16, 27 May 2006 (UTC)


 * He's not joking. Here's a page which has gathered together a couple of responses on the subject from various interviews.  It's clear he's treating the subject with some humour, but it's not a gag.--Nalvage 15:24, 28 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I stand corrected. Thanks, good thing I checked first. - Xtreme680 21:44, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

Alan Smitheed
The article originally included the phrase, "Moore has also stated that he wishes his name to be "Alan Smitheed" from comic work that he does not own". Clearly the writer of this meant to use Smithee's name as a verb, hence the inverted commas and the sentence structure, but people keep assuming it's a typo and changing it to "Alan Smithee" which then makes no grammatical sense. So I've changed it to "removed". Hope that's okay by everyone.--Nalvage 12:24, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
 * I saw that and think it's a great move. I am going to find a place to put a link to Alan Smithee in there somewhere, just to please everyone. --Chris Griswold 00:05, 31 May 2006 (UTC)

The Lost Girls
Could someone detail his graphic novel The Lost Girls? There doesn't seem to be any mention here. I would, but I've only heard of it from one news story. Peace. JayW 16:07, 6 July 2006 (UTC)


 * It's mentioned briefly under "The independent period", and has its own article at Lost Girls. Probably deserves a bit more notice here. --Nicknack009 18:33, 6 July 2006 (UTC)


 * I've added a very brief section under 'Major Works' - if the picture stays it probably needs another paragraph adding to it so the formatting isn't all wonky, but I was wary of repeating information that's in the main Lost Girls article. Since I live in the UK and therefore haven't read it yet, I'm a bit stuck on what else to add. I'd be grateful if someone else could expand a bit so this section is inkeeping with the other titles listed under 'major works' Curiousbadger 15:19, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
 * I think you summed it up nicely. I might add another line.  Definitely worth reading for older and demanding comic fans  I think Moore was being deliberately provocative in categorizing it as pornography.  I believe it was seized by Australian customs at one stage.  This should be the model for the other major works summations.  Fred.e 15:59, 16 October 2006 (UTC)

Graphic Novels
"including the acclaimed graphic novels, Watchmen, V for Vendetta and From Hell". But Alan Moore hates the term graphic novel and considers his work to be mainly just usual comics, as he has stated that he considers that graphic novels is just an unnecesary term for "expensive comics". Should it be changed here?


 * changed to what, "expensive comics"? I don't think it should be changed at all, as the term is widely used and recognised, regardless of what he thinks of it. --duncan 07:12, 14 July 2006 (UTC)

I've no objection to the term 'graphic novel,' as long as what it is talking about is actually some sort of graphic work that could conceivably be described as a novel.

Iron Ghost 12:17, 14 July 2006 (UTC)


 * My understanding is that the issue is he hasn't produced a lot of graphic novels - he has done a lot of comic work that has been collected together as trade paperbacks, something I've tried to show in his bibliography. As he is a fan of Bryan Talbot's work I suspect he is contrasting his own output with things like Luther Arkwright. The only true graphic novels I can think of are A Small Killing, The 49ers and probably Lost Girls. If the wording is going to be changed then graphic novels could be changed to "trades" or just "comic books" or "limited series". Then again it might be nitpicking as most people would understand when you call Watchmen a graphic novel but that is the angle I suspect he is coming from. (Emperor 00:55, 31 July 2006 (UTC))


 * I disagree. "sort of graphic work that could conceivably be described as a novel" refers to a work that is comparable to a novel in terms of length, scope and artistic unity, not simply something that was first published in book format rather than pamphlet format. The only comics I own that I would consider comparable to novels are Watchmen, From Hell, Luther Arkwright and Cages, all of which were serialised before being published in a single volume (as were all Dickens's novels, and we don't call them "limited series"), and possibly the entire series of Sandman, which is a single work published in several volumes, like many Victorian novels, and Lord of the Rings. A Small Killing is probably too short to be a true novel, as is The Forty-Niners which is also an installment of a series rather than a unified work (this is not a judgement of quality, just a personal judgment of whether they're comparable to novels - I like 'em both, and admire a lot of comics, from Tintin to the Desert Peach, that aren't novelistic at all, and are no worse for that). "Trade paperback" is jargon and shouldn't be used in a work for the general reader - it's a wholesaling term and just means an oversized paperback book, regardless of content. --Nicknack009 08:11, 31 July 2006 (UTC)


 * It's a tough call. I agree that the term "trade paperback" should not be used. I would be happy with either "graphic novel" or "limited series". Although, there is more agreement to the precise meaning of the term "limited series" and therefore it might be slightly preferable. --Iron Ghost 13:30, 31 July 2006 (UTC)

Too long
As editors have no doubt noticed when they edit this piece, it's much longer than Wikipedia guidelines suggest an article should be. There are reasons for these guidelines; a too-long piece is both hard to read and hard to edit as a whole.

One easy way to cut is to make the summaries of his major works much shorter; these works all have lengthy articles of their own, and people who are interested can follow those links if they like. As it is, we sort of have two articles on Watchmen, From Hell, etc., which is not an ideal arrangement of information. Just a thought. Nareek 19:29, 8 August 2006 (UTC)

Can't the article be broken up so that wathcmen, from hell all have their own pages? Andham2000


 * These works already do have their own extensive pages--there's no need to go on at such length about them here. Nareek 19:06, 28 September 2006 (UTC)


 * Would anyone protest if I simply moved the entire section "Major Works" into a seperate article, "Major Works of Alan Moore"? I think it disrupt the article to have the major works described twice, once in the historical part, and then again in its own part.  And as mentioned above, each of the major works have their own extensive articles, which will still be listed from the historical part.--Per Abrahamsen 05:36, 11 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Can I suggest you summarise it instead. I'm sure if people (like me) want a complete list they use an external link.Fred.e 15:48, 11 October 2006 (UTC)


 * It is already a summary. If it is condenced further, it is even harder to justify over the the history section, which also mentions his major works.  It is not a complete list in any case, the complete list can presumably be found in List of published material by Alan Moore.--Per Abrahamsen 16:16, 11 October 2006 (UTC)
 * I think a merge of the major work list and individual sections into a discussion of their commercial and critical success and their influence as a whole is what the bio article needs. I'll have a go and post it here. --Fred.e 19:15, 11 October 2006 (UTC)

Influences
Is this list of influences in the second half of the second paragraph really meaningful? I'm sure it's totally useless in an encyclopedic sense. It is unverifiable opinion and just pushes the indisputable facts down into what is already too long an article.

Lead section
I moved some sentences about his other works out of the lead section. As per WP:LEAD, the lead section of the article should attempt to summarize the article. Too much emphasis was given to these other works by putting them in the lead section, hence the move. The lead section could still stand some rewriting — it's fairly small considering the over-the-suggested-limit size of the article. However, I couldn't think of a clever, concise way to introduce, for example, his disputes with the major comic book companies into the lead section. So, I'll leave it to someone else. --GentlemanGhost 01:18, 11 October 2006 (UTC)

Assessment
Not a bad article at all. Needs a free license image and could stand some more references in the works section is all. Hiding Talk 22:28, 26 October 2006 (UTC)

Now GA rated, after a successful Good article nomination. --Mrph 20:46, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
 * GA rating

Great Work!
This is one of the best articles on Wikipedia. Do not seek to reduce it further. The length is quite fine!

--Gautam3 03:18, 6 November 2006 (UTC)

YouTube links
This article is one of thousands on Wikipedia that have a link to YouTube in it. Based on the External links policy, most of these should probably be removed. I'm putting this message here, on this talk page, to request the regular editors take a look at the link and make sure it doesn't violate policy. In short: 1. 99% of the time YouTube should not be used as a source. 2. We must not link to material that violates someones copyright. If you are not sure if the link on this article should be removed, feel free to ask me on my talk page and I'll review it personally. Thanks. ---J.S (t|c) 07:52, 7 November 2006 (UTC)

Undoubtedly. The other thing is that YouTube links are not stable or permanent. Even if it was a good 'source' to be used and cite, the likelihood that Youtube videos have dissappeared or been removed is very high.

--Gautam3 23:43, 8 November 2006 (UTC)

Writing style
How in what style does Alan Moore write?

Tgunn2 01:33, 9 November 2006 (UTC)

I guess that I don't understand the question...how would the answer help the main page? --Gautam3 05:59, 10 November 2006 (UTC)

Concise and informative
... Is what the article could nearly be! This is roughly a Biography not a review of works. Extensive discussion is on the pages about those works. I don't think it should be the end result of chat room type discussions about tiny details. One needs to take a step back and read the style manuals and guides before including reams of information. Try thinking about what first hooked you and others on him. People will probably be wanting to know who he is or a bit more about his work or life. Most people are not going to plough through this article other than those who are already fans. And there is no end of newsgroups. I have nearly everthing he has done (confessed completist) but trying to be objective to make this a feature article. This helped me on another article i wrote, anyway. Great there are so many interested editors Fred.e 22:35, 1 December 2006 (UTC)

Polygamy
I don't believe for one second that Alan Moore is a polygamist. I guess the basis is that he and his ex-wife had a female lover, but that's not the same thing as polygamy.

One of the things that I love about Alan Moore is that he's such a feminist. Someone should change this. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 72.29.211.18 (talk • contribs).

Rewrite
I removed this. It is not appropiate to include in a bio of a living person. 'V for...' picture is in twice. Suppose sommeone will argue they need to stay as well as having its own article. Suggest that this be renamed to Alan Moore data dump. Can we have an article that people would want read, esp. if they know nothing about or little about him. Drop me a note if you want to form a editing co-op to improve this to a good article then feature. Fred.e 18:19, 3 December 2006 (UTC)


 * All articles on remotely geeky subjects risk becoming data dumps. It's inherent in the wiki that there's no sense of selection, and many comics fans are information hoarders by nature. I haven't worked on this article for ages, and I'm dismayed that a helpful paragraph in the intro detailing his influences has been removed and replaced by meaningless hyperbole ("His works have helped to revolutionise the comic industry and are widely held to be some of the greatest comics ever written"). I believe the main reason Moore, and others like Morrison and Gaiman who followed him, were such a breath of fresh air in comics was that they were much more widely read than most comics writers and brought a wider variety of influences to their work. This is is a medium where Garth Ennis, influenced by John Wayne and Clint Eastwood movies, is regarded as bringing something fresh to the mix. Ithink the bit about his influences should be restored (and refs found, which shouldn't be hard) and most of the material in the "Major works" sections should be hived off into their own articles. Then we can look at the article as it stands and see what's significant and what's not. With a bit of effort we could turn this into a really good article - but I guarantee you in a couple of months' time it'll be a data dump again. --Nicknack009 00:07, 4 December 2006 (UTC)


 * I've given the article a pretty throrough rewrite, removing redundancies and trimming the style a bit, and brought it down from 53K to 35K. I've also moved the adaptations list from here to the List of published material by Alan Moore article, as it seems a bit silly for the main article to contain a bibliography of adaptations but not of his own work. I'm going to be retrieving some of the material cut from the "major works" section from the history and incorporating it into those works' own articles. --Nicknack009 02:40, 4 December 2006 (UTC)

Factural accuracy: Marital Status
I just recently added the detail that Melinda Gebbie is Moore's fiancée, based on the article and interview in the August 23, 2006 Village Voice, but I then scrolled further down and saw that it asserts that she's his wife. Have they gotten married within the past two and a half months? Can anyone confirm what their marital status is with a source? Thanks. Nightscream 11:32, 14 November 2006 (UTC)

Reference 17 (northants echo) which is dated 08 November 2006 refers to Melinda Gebbie as his fiancee, this suggests to me that they are not married. Though they are now co-habiting, which is interesting after i read an interview some years back extolling the joys of both having their own houses —Foxydavid 15:26, 13 January 2007 (UTC)


 * They are married. It's not an RS, but Neil Gaiman blogged about the wedding in about... October? September? As it's fairly non-controversial, I'll find some coverage and post it. ThuranX (talk) 14:20, 21 January 2008 (UTC)


 * One: Our own page on her: Melinda_Gebbie. Two, this which cites NG's blog. Finally, Half way down the first page 'married earlier this year], article written 2007. ThuranX (talk) 14:27, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
 * Gaiman's blog would be reliable enough for this if you asked me, but the extra one's don't hurt. Gaiman is in his sphere of expertise and his views are published in reliable publications. Hiding T 16:29, 21 January 2008 (UTC)

Introduction
Can we have some discussion about the second paragraph of the introduction? It's my opinion that the whole thing should be removed, influences should be listed under influences in the photo box. The actual content of this paragraph other than the list of influences almost non-existent, I believe it pushes the actual valuable content further down the page. Look up almost any author on Wikipedia; you won't normally find a list of influences in the second paragraph. I think that it's symptomatic of a comics "community" craving acceptance by readers of non illustrated literature and I for one think it's time to admit that that acceptance is already there when someone arrives at this page; what's important is to and present some good encycopedic content.


 * I disagree very strongly. Any artist's influences are important and should not be neglected. Specifically in Moore's case, a large part of the impact he made was down to him having a wider range of influences than the average comics writer in the early 80s. Along with the likes of Bryan Talbot and Grant Morrison, he is part of a movement that stems from the New Wave science fiction writers of the 60s and 70s. To include his influences is to place his work in context and tell the reader something about his work. To ignore them and treat him in isolation is uninformative and risks becoming a cult of personality. Such an approach is sadly not uncommon - the article on Bill Sienkiewicz mentions his influence on other artists, but not that he was influenced by artists like Neal Adams, Barron Storey and Ralph Steadman, and Glenn Fabry's article doesn't mention the influence of Moebius or Gustave Courbet, but they should, and if I can find appropriate references they will. --Nicknack009 22:23, 15 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Well what you have written makes more sense and reads better than what is there. I think that phrases like "a large part of the impact he made was down to him having a wider range of influences than the average comics writer in the early 80s. Along with the likes of Bryan Talbot and Grant Morrison, he is part of a movement that stems from the New Wave science fiction writers of the 60s and 70s."  Should be in the article but the list itself should be moved to the list of influences in the data box or whatever it's called under his photo on the right. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 82.20.47.30 (talk) 16:30, 17 February 2007 (UTC).

Can we have some discussion about the assertion in the second paragraph "[Moore] has subsequently been attributed with the development of the term "graphic novel" over "comic book"."[note 9) - I have not read this attribution anywhere else. To the best of my knowledge Moore dislikes the term graphic novel, see his quotes in the Wikipedia article graphic novel. He never set out to write gn's (unlike Eisner or Spiegelman). Watchmen is undoubtedly a key title in the development of the graphic novel, but that does not merit attributing development of the term to Moore. I move to delete this assertion. That's also good riddance to an unclear citation. How about inserting somewhere else (f.i. in the first paragraph after best British writer) a much more interesting observation by Douglas Wolk: "[Moore is] the chief monkey wrench in comics author theory. The main reason that almost nobody's willing to say that a single cartoonist is categorically superior to a writer/artist team is that such a rule would run smack into Moore's bibliography. (Douglas Wolk, Reading Comics, p. 229, Camebridge, Mass: Da Capo Press, 2007). The chapter "Alan Moore: The House of the Magus", pp. 228-257 is full of good observations and overall a lot more insightful than Lance Parkin's Pocket Essential on Alan Moore. Perhaps it should be included in the References section? Rienkt (talk) 14:54, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

Comic Strip Cartoonists

 * Can somebody please cite a reason as to why he is included in the comic strip cartoonists? To the extent of my knowledge, that is a misrepresentation of what he does. Comic books are generally not the same as comic strips, though they might have at one time been quite similar. Unless of course, he actually has done comic strip writing before, in which case I withdraw my statement. But I'd like a reason. Jjmckool 07:47, 22 June 2007 (UTC)


 * If you look at the "early work" section you'll see he started out drawing comic strips for British music magazines and a local newspaper. --Nicknack009 16:19, 22 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Gotcha, I lays my head down in defeat. Didn't read the whole article, my bad. Jjmckool 23:53, 23 June 2007 (UTC)

GA status
After taking a look at the article, as well as its many failed FA candidacies, I think that the same issues raised in the FA reviews might bar the article from GA status. The article was promoted to GA status about a year and a half ago, but the GA criteria have changed dramatically since then (in fact I think there were no criteria at all in Jan 2006). The main problems as far as I see them, are that many of the fair-use images either lack a rationale or don't give it's source. There are also many sections that are under referenced or not referenced at all. That is in addition to some of the other points brought up in the FA reviews. I wanted to bring this up here to give editors and contributors a chance to work on the article and hopefully improve it based on the GA criteria. Otherwise, I'll nominate the article for GA review soon. Drewcifer3000 05:27, 25 August 2007 (UTC)


 * I've hidden the images lacking rationales. To be honest, I'm not sure we need as many as we have. Beyond that, I agree that there are problems with this article.  Some kind of outside review might not go amiss. --Mark H Wilkinson (t, c) 08:44, 25 August 2007 (UTC)

Politics
I added a link to an interview regarding his anarchist leanings. I will add a politics section sometime in the next week. ;) veganbikepunk —Preceding unsigned comment added by Veganbikepunk (talk • contribs) 21:58, 25 September 2007 (UTC)

Bits and bobs
Things that might be useful include: Picked them up via Lying in the Gutters and thought they could come in handy. (Emperor 02:27, 10 October 2007 (UTC))
 * Interview with the Daily Telegraph
 * Ragnarok - his first film


 * Another - an interview about anarchy. (Emperor 14:44, 10 October 2007 (UTC))

V for Vendetta Template
I'm removing this template from all its articles:

Which, I agree, is fairly provocative. However, I don't see how "V for Vendetta" deserves this on its own, or what useful information it provides. Surely the links in the articles are sufficient? If people want to revert my changes, that's fine by me. But please reply to this post so we can get a discussion started. At the moment I see no reason why the template should exist. Maccy69 13:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)


 * We are discussing comic-specific categories on the Comics Project talk page and the suggestion is to make them into such navboxes and this would include the V for Vendetta one. (Emperor 17:24, 18 October 2007 (UTC))


 * I've reverted my previous edit and requested a template deletion instead, see below. Maccy69 17:36, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

TfD nomination of Template:V for Vendetta
Template:V for Vendetta has been nominated for deletion. You are invited to comment on the discussion at the template's entry on the Templates for Deletion page. Thank you. — Maccy69 17:36, 18 October 2007 (UTC)

External links removal rationale
Hello. Although the EL removal looked extreme, I thought it is warranted. Please see discussion below.


 * 1) Any site that does not provide a unique resource beyond what the article would contain if it became a Featured article.


 * Alan Moore on split from DC/V for Vendetta
 * Roger Whitson writes on Alan Moore's relationship with William Blake in Watchmen
 * "To Hell with Alan Moore" an overview of movies based on the works of Alan Moore
 * Alan Moore speaks to his personal politics with Strangers In A Tangled Wilderness
 * Index of interviews
 * Alan Moore interviewed on Get Fresh (YouTube clip)

Although I think the sites above have good content, they could be used as references to imporve the article, but not as an EL.


 * 1) Links to sites that primarily exist to sell products or services.
 * America's Best Comics
 * Alan Moore on Marvel.com
 * 4ColorHeroes Moore For Free

Even if the idea is to send the reader to the way of content, there is many more links that could be used here for his past work... in this case maybe it would be better to use a DMOZ tag. Thoughts? --Legionarius (talk) 18:06, 4 January 2008 (UTC)


 * The clause "Any site that does not provide a unique resource beyond what the article would contain if it became a Featured article" under "Links normally to be avoided" does not give you licence to remove almost any link, as you appear to believe. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a collection of all knowledge on a given subject, so your interpretation of this clause is incorrect. Most of the links given are interviews with Moore, and no matter how good or how comprehensive this article got, the words of the man himself would be a resource beyond what the article could provide. --Nicknack009 (talk) 21:23, 4 January 2008 (UTC)

Infobox
Any particular reason why Mr Moore's details appear to be in the "writer" infobox rather than the "comics creator" one..? ntnon (talk) 03:42, 16 June 2008 (UTC)

Biography and personal life
I have removed a surname from this section as I do not believe these details should be published on the internet without that person's consent. I appreciate the information has been widely available for some years, and still is available quite easily, but I do not think that it is something that should be included on a Wikipedia entry without that person's consent. Its seems prurient and tabloidy to me. I am Mr Moore's daughter, and I know that all parties involved have now got different partners, and apart from my father, they have normal day jobs too. I would appreciate it if my deleting this name was respected, and it not be replaced in the text. --Leah Moore (talk) 14:08, 18 June 2008 (UTC)

Alan Moore Artwork
Hello, I have in my possession two posters that Alan Moore produced to support social causes - one is from the early 1980s and one is from the year 2007. Would they be helpful additions to the article? (I can scan them). --Killerofcruft (talk) 18:58, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes. Bonemorrow (talk) 04:29, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

Philosophy
I'm going to request a bit of assistance on this one, since I'm busy on multiple projects. I'm going to try to pull together a "Philosophy" section – perhaps a subsection of his biography, although we may have enough for a whole section onto itself, as he has been interviewed about it often. This is for any of his spiritual, political, and philosophical positions. Anything regarding religion, sexuality, aesthetics, environmentalism, anarchism, and anything you can think of. I'll try to write it up in a few days and continue as we go.--Cast (talk) 03:46, 4 July 2008 (UTC)


 * no matter what his views are, this page really doesn't belong in "WikiProject Philosophy", which is where it is now, strangely.70.55.55.235 (talk) 00:29, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
 * No, this is appropriate. Take a look at the banner.  Mr. Moore is listed under the WP Philosophy "Anarchist Task Force", due to his anarchist philosophy.  The task force isn't just focused on articles explaining anarchist philosophy, but also on anarchist biographies.  Alan Moore has repeatedly expressed his anarchist views in interviews, and used them as the basis for V for Vendetta.  He has also used his philosophical views as the basis for other books, such as his exploration of ethics in Watchmen, the sex-positive perspective in Lost Girls, and also his environmentalist and anti-nuclear approach to Swamp Thing.  The Philosophy banner is appropriate for this article; we just need to create a philosophy section for it.--Cast (talk) 01:43, 14 August 2008 (UTC)


 * You might be able to get something associated with this from - see, for example, the section above - his work/support/posters for various charities. A Northampton Council Housing one was a recent instance, which surely implies a philosophical position akin to socialism... (Or something.) ntnon (talk) 02:58, 14 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the suggestions, and I'll look into them, but so we're clear, I don't want to make any leaps and state he has positions based on implication. I want quotes where he lays out his personal opinions in notable interviews.--Cast (talk) 04:47, 14 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Of course. I would suspect this instance would have been covered in a local paper, but I'm sure I recall mention in another interview, too. I'll try and have a look later on for you. Are you working on the section online, offline or 'later on'..? ntnon (talk) 03:13, 16 August 2008 (UTC)


 * I'd like to work on it on the actual article space, as working from a sandbox can limit the amount of input generated from browsing users, and working on it offline always leaves the possibility that it may be lost. By editing-as-I-go I can at least avoid losing my updates, even if it will increase the article history menu exponentially (I have a habit of constantly having to correct myself, or second guessing edits, causing relatively small changes to take place over the course of a dozen even smaller edits.)  I would like to just compile as many links to online sources on a small list right here, on this section of the talk page.  All the same, I'm not editing the article right now, as I'm taking a break from my usual wiki-projects, like the anarchism task force, and by extension, this anarchist biography.  I'll get to it in time, but you may feel free to begin editing it as you wish.  I'll put a few source links down right now.  (Note, this isn't an attempt at "source solicitation".  I just can't think of a better place to put such a list.  Seems appropriate for it to be here, anyway.) --Cast (talk) 06:54, 16 August 2008 (UTC)

Alan Moore commentary on:
 * magic, religion, and fundamentalist Christianity:Alan Moore interview with Stewart Lee, on Youtube.
 * anarchism: Authors on Anarchism, on Infoshop.org
 * anarchism: Alan Moore interview on V for Vendetta and anarchism, on Youtube
 * literature, art, environmentalism, and fantasy: Monsters, Maniacs and Moore, series on Youtube.
 * fantasy: Alan Moore on the value of fantasy, on Youtube
 * life transformation: Alan Moore Steve Bissette on Prisoners of Gravity, on Youtube.
 * art & literature: Inside Out East 21/03/08, on Youtube
 * Pornography vs. Erotica, and sexuality: Alan Moore interview on Lost Girls, on Youtube.
 * the role of dystopian fiction, as commentary on the present: The Mindscape Of Alan Moore - Excerpt 1 - V, on Youtube.
 * censorship, freedom of speech, etc.: Protest

Lying in the Gutters
I've twice restored a reference to Lying In The Gutters, which was deleted on the grounds that it's a "gossip" column. More accurately, it's a column that includes both gossip and credible reportage. Johnston labels the whole thing "gossip" because that gives him the leeway to do both, and probably improves his page-hits. But he labels each item (or some cases, an entire week's column) according to its level of journalistic credibility, which makes it possible to cite him as a reliable source for the items that qualify as journalism. This particular article was clearly labeled as "not gossip" and was based on an actual interview with Moore with direct quotes. Moore knows about the column and hasn't denounced it as fraudulent (which he wouldn't be shy about doing). It's as reliable a source on this subject than any other article which claims to quote Moore. - JasonAQuest (talk) 13:04, 20 September 2008 (UTC)


 * I dispute respectfully everything you just said. He uses a light system to assess the credibility of what he writes.  This allows him to have the ability to deny whatever he wants if it is inaccurate. Therefore nothing he writes in the LITG column is credible.  This has been established at other articles before.  NOT a responsible source.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Allknowingallseeing (talk • contribs) 19:06, 20 September 2008 (UTC)


 * If its known a a gossip column that precludes it from being a wikipedia reliable source. Thanks, SqueakBox 19:21, 20 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Not necessarily. WP:V is quite clear on the matter of exceptions for the blanket condemnation of self-published and questionable sources - namely in the following two points:

":::Self-published material may, in some circumstances, be acceptable when produced by an established expert on the topic of the article whose work in the relevant field has previously been published by reliable third-party publications. However, caution should be exercised when using such sources: if the information in question is really worth reporting, someone else is likely to have done so. For example, a reliable self-published source on a given subject is likely to have been cited on that subject as authoritative by a reliable source." ":::Questionable sources are those with a poor reputation for fact-checking. Questionable sources include websites and publications that express views that are widely acknowledged as extremist, are promotional in nature, or rely heavily on rumors and personal opinions. Because of this, they can be treated similarly to the way self-published sources are treated. Questionable sources should only be used as sources about themselves..."
 * Now, some of the points under contention here are exempt anyway, because they are not inherently questionable - an interview is not inherently questionable; a piece of investigative journalism is not inherently questionable. Spurious speculation and random gossip is of course generally un-citeable, but the guidelines above allow for select quotation on select, corroborated subjects because:
 * Johnston is a reliable expert on the subject of comics, able to contact (although admittedly he may not always do so) the people he writes about for comment.
 * (This logic is paradoxical, but allowed under the above guideline.) When Johnston's articles/interviews are quoted elsewhere, i.e. "a reliable self-published source on a given subject is likely to have been cited on that subject as authoritative by a reliable source," it becomes a logically acceptable source in its own right. So when Johnston interviews Moore, and these comments are picked up elsewhere...
 * "Questionable sources should only be used as sources about themselves..." Some interpretations of that guideline would specifically exempt interviews as even being labelled 'questionable'.
 * "Questionable sources are those with a poor reputation for fact-checking." An interview expressing the subject's personal views can only be fact-checked by that person, strongly suggesting accuracy when comments are not retracted/corrected. Mr Johnston has not retroactively edited these comments out, Mr Moore has not notably dissociated himself from them.
 * The comment User:Allknowingallseeing edited out regarding From Hell was rightly removed. The criticism's of V for Vendetta may be petty, and thus could be left out for reasons of pettiness/politeness, but could easily be kept as cited from a reasonable source. A 'more reliable' source would certainly be advisable and preferable. But 'straight from the horse's mouth' is surely the most reliable source. Admittedly here it is filtered through a potentially questionable source, so debates on various sources - and specific items within the sources, since even a 'reliable' publciation can err - are the right way forward. Disagreement is valid and useful, but in-built 'plausible deniability' is not grounds to dimiss snippets of information. ntnon (talk) 21:30, 20 September 2008 (UTC)

I ask anyone weighing in on this (especially Allknowingallseeing [sic]) to set aside their assumptions about LITG and read the specific article cited, particularly its intro. Even if you were to summarily dismiss most other installments of the column because of Johnston's usual disclaimers, this article has no claim of plausible deniability on it. It is presented as "investigative journalism", and when Johnston takes the trouble to adhere to journalistic standards (as he chose to do for this article) and both he and his publisher stand by it, it is prejudicial to assert that his is somehow less reliable a source than that of any other interviewer (particularly since he is considered an expert on the subject of Moore's disputes with publishers). - JasonAQuest (talk) 02:04, 21 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Quite. "..some of the points under contention here are exempt anyway, because they are not inherently questionable - an interview is not inherently questionable; a piece of investigative journalism is not inherently questionable." ntnon (talk) 14:21, 21 September 2008 (UTC)


 * I agree - the consensus at the Comics Project was that while some sites might be acceptable to use, we can't use their gossip columns and LitG is the main one, something which Johnston himself has accepted in one column. However, he has conducted a lot of useful interviews (in the various columns he has written) and can be considered "reliable" if he, for example, passes on a comment from a named source - it is the rumour that we have to avoid. As has been said, he did switch the column to an investigative journalism footing for a while which means it needn't be considered as a gossip column and so it is suitable for inclusion (although just to be on the safe side I think this should be decided on a case-by-case basis). (Emperor (talk) 15:18, 21 September 2008 (UTC))
 * Judging citations of LITG on a case-by-case basis is exactly what I have been arguing for. - JasonAQuest (talk) 23:27, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Not necessarily the usually LitG as a gossip column (that is pretty much out) just the switch to a more journalistic take of which the link in question is one. (Emperor (talk) 00:36, 22 September 2008 (UTC))


 * If we cite a gossip site as a reference, one that revels in publishing rumors, then how are we an encyclopedia?Allknowingallseeing (talk) 05:19, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
 * We would be the kind that has reasonable discussions on a case-by-case basis to determine the verifiability and notability of a source. You can't trust or distrust a source %100 percent of the time.--Cast (talk) 05:59, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Kind of like we don't automatically assume that every "new" user whose very first edits are assertive ones steeped in an opinionated familiarity with Wikipedia policies, is a sockpuppet. - JasonAQuest (talk) 11:59, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
 * My argument is that the link in question is when LiTG wasn't operating as a gossip column and so it doesn't fall under the consensus decision that we shouldn't use gossip columns, even if they are on sites we'd usually happily link to in other circumstances (LitG just being the highest profile example). I don't see a problem with that but obviously if there is the feeling this is just some kind of fancy loop hole (which I don't think it is) then we will take it back to the Comics Project to kick around. (Emperor (talk) 22:33, 22 September 2008 (UTC))
 * Then, Cast, that would mean that SOMETIMES People magazine is a valid source. And it isn't.Allknowingallseeing (talk) 14:16, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Not ever? I'd appreciate a citation for this. -JasonAQuest (talk) 18:35, 22 September 2008 (UTC)
 * There can be no citation for this. There are going to be times when People Magazine is a reliable source for some kind of information.  This user has revealed their ideological tendency, and in previous edits, has made inappropriate remarks, such as insisting that the source in question must be disregarded for using a "light system" when none is present; that the article is a gossip column, when it is only authored by a man who writes a separate gossip column; and that the source is questionable, when the quoted information is a direct quote from the article subject, Alan Moore himself.  I don't think it is possible to negotiate with a user who is unwilling to compromise despite their repeated display of misdirection and ignorance in the case.  I move that the source be used and that any further attempts by Allknowingallseeing to remove it be viewed as an act of disruptive Wikilawyering.  I cite the second, third, and fourth points which describe such actions:
 * 2. Abiding by the letter of a policy or guideline while violating its principles;
 * 3. Asserting that the technical interpretation of Wikipedia:Policies and guidelines should override the principles they express;
 * 4. Misinterpreting policy or relying on technicalities to justify inappropriate actions.
 * --Cast (talk) 00:03, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
 * You know what? No, I'm not going to go this far just yet.  I'm going to give the user a little bit longer to prove (not merely assert) their point.  But for all this disruption, I hope that proof of this cite's non-reliability will be swift in coming – really, it should have come by now. --Cast (talk) 00:19, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Please don't talk about appropriate. PLease do not condescend. I have spoken to Rich Johnston directly and he does not feel that his column should be taken as the definitive of anything.  People magazine is NEVER to be a source. Weekly World News is not an encyclopedic source.  It is clear to this editor that you want to undermine the encyclopedia by bringing in non-encyclopedic sources.  A FAR MORE experienced editor than either of us, a fan of Haile Selassie, has spoken that Johnston is not an encyclopedic source.  Let it go.  Move on.  Find a girl etc. Allknowingallseeing (talk) 07:01, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Of that entire comment, the bit by Rich Johnston is the only useful part you've just left, but again, the cited column is using direct quotes of Alan Moore, so his opinion in this sole scenario is inaccurate. People Magazine is an appropriate source for non-controversial statements about the magazine itself.  So at least that one time, it would be.  Weekly World News would not be useful as a source on its article content, but could be used to see who is part of its production staff.  Who is this more experienced editor, and why is their opinion on this matter more valid than mine?  Find a girl?  What makes you think I'm not a girl? Careful: now you're moving into personal insult territory.  I'm really going to have to insist you address that the cited column is referring to a direct quote on the part of Alan Moore.  Do you feel that Rich Jonston would not have accurately reproduced the quote?  It is not a controversial quote to believe Moore would have made, and given his high profile, it's incredibly unlikely that Johnston would have made it up, and that it would have gone unchallenged by Moore this long.  Similar interviews were used as citations by myself for comments made by Alan Grant and Norm Breyfogle for the article on Anarky, which is now listed as being FA quality. --Cast (talk) 08:14, 23 September 2008 (UTC)


 * A "fan of Haile Selassie"? The Rastafarian Gambit - a cunning one but we need to break it down so we are clear on what the current consensus is (or my reading of it and how it applies here) as "Johnston is not an encyclopedic source" is not strictly correct:
 * Johnston has done a lot of online comic work at various sites and we cannot rule out his other work because he currently happens to write a rumour column.
 * The consensus is that we cannot use rumour/gossip columns for sources, of which Lying in the Gutters is just the most high profile examples - no need to IM Rich as this came up over the League of Extraordinary Gentlemen lawsuit article (now no longer with us) and he said in his column that he agreed (I can find this if required).
 * I feel that the switch to a more investigative journalism angle means that this specific page doesn't fall under the definition of being a gossip column (even if LitG usually does) - worth noting that in a Comic Journal survey, Johnston scored the highest of all online column writers for investigative journalism, so when he does it he clearly does it well.
 * However, I do think it could be a grey area and if so (and I don't think either side are going to change their opinions any time soon on this) then we'll have to take it to the Comics project talk page and see what the consensus is.
 * So that is how the land lies, as far as I can tell, I'll see how things go here but if need be we can kick it "upstairs" for a more final decision. (Emperor (talk) 16:37, 23 September 2008 (UTC))


 * Getting something listed here as FA is FE (fairly easy) and thus meaningless. My comment was not an insult unless you take it that way- I was suggesting you do something else rather than argue that Johnston is authoritative when he himself (go ahead and IM him- it is Twistrich and he lists it on his column) says nothing he says should be taken as fact!  Find a girlfriend means just that- find something else to do rather than continue an argument that you have defacto lost.  I have read articles in People Magazine with direct quotes of Jamie Lynn Spears who then says she didn't say that.  Hence direct quotes are meaningless depending on the source.  Johnston is also on the outs with Moore (like most of the world) and thus his "quotes" are arguable.  We must have strong, provable citations under BLP or we will fall under our own weight.  NOTHING is more important that BLP here and thus any "gossip site" quotes MUST be deleted upon sight- DO NO HARM. Allknowingallseeing (talk) 15:55, 23 September 2008 (UTC)


 * The ease or lack thereof with which one attains an FA status for an article is beside the point and is not meaningless. If you can use quotes from columns in an FA article, it is because it is can be trusted for these uncontroversial statements.  But again about People, I insist a source can be used on some occasions.  In the case of People, it can be used for non-controversial information that informs its notability – if that looks like staff listings, than that's it.  It can be used once, and you shouldn't be writing "never".  If it can't be trusted for quotes, don't use it for that purpose, except in reference to any notable controversy that such a quote might stir.  And again, stop insisting I should stop addressing this issue.  As the editor making the assertion that this source cannot be trusted, it falls to you to prove your point.  I've merely tried to hold you to this standard.  Trying to drive me away so that the discussion is quickly concluded in your favor is not in line with your desire to "do no harm".  Now, for other editors here with a desire to continue discussing this matter for the benefit of this article's improvement: is there any reason to believe that these quotes by Moore have not been altered? Allknowingallseeing finally addressed whether or not Alan Moore's quotes can be trusted (and it only took days, be faster next time) by stating Moore is in disagreement with the writer, so I feel there is plausible doubt.  Do we have statements by other interviewees that their quotes were ever changed? --Cast (talk) 16:49, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I just realized, was Alan Moore "on the outs" with Johnston when this interview took place? That would cast doubt on the assertion that these quotes cannot be trusted if the two are fighting.  Would the interview have even taken place if that were the case? I doubt it. --Cast (talk) 17:00, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Some source for the assertion that Johnston is "on the outs with" Moore would be appreciated as well. If so, would this necessarily render a columnist's work uncitable?  After all, such a standard would be rather easy for a subject to abuse (e.g. a president who didn't like the coverage of his administration in a newspaper could declare them an "enemy" and thereby render their reports about him off-limits in Wikipedia). - JasonAQuest (talk) 02:13, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * You see the problem with this discusion with Cast and the less illuminated JasonAQuest is that they WANT to figure out a why to "get this information in there" and if one questions their fanatical behavior one is accused of personal attacks. I know neither of them personally so I am not attacking their persons.  I am attacking their desire to jam self important tidbits of information into an article under BLP.  I do not think enough people realize that BLO is actually more important that the entire project- if we hurt one reputation we should close down.  So unless the "fact" is citable from a reputable source it does NOT belong in a BLP- ever ever ever. If Rich himself says that he sometimes doesn't do the necessary digging and he doesn't tell us when where or who, then he should not be citable in an encyclopedia.  This is HIGHLY Truthful if not Haile SelassieAllknowingallseeing (talk) 03:46, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I won't comment on the rights or wrongs of including or deleting this material. However, whichever way you cut it "get a girl" is an insult intended to disparage someone's personal life, so the fact you don't know the person in question is irrelevant. It's a personal attack. Worse, when called on it you tried to justify it, rather than withdraw it and apologise, as would have been the decent thing to do. --Nicknack009 (talk) 11:34, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * "Fanatical"? Really?  Okay, you can stop claiming your not trying to be personal.  Insults can be personal even if you don't know us personally.  That just makes them more likely to be wrong.  Anyway, the users who are defending this citation have repeatedly given their reason to express why they feel it is legitimate, and each time you have expressed why it is not, they have provided explanation which counters your assertions.  You, however, have yet to make a point that cannot be countered given the context of this quote.  Now I did feel sympathetic when you expressed that the author and quoted personality do not get along, but when asked for a citation and explanation for how this effects the quote, you ignore the question and refer to myself and another user as "fanatics".  "Fanatics" of what, pray tell?  Critical thinking and discussion?  If nothing else, can you at least stay focused on the topic at hand and stop trying to tangent into personal insults.  This is a talk page for improving the article.  Not a forum for your outrage. --Cast (talk) 06:42, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Also, who's reputation are you protecting? The quoted text doesn't disparage anyone.  And your own text highlights the issue we're addressing.  "If Rich himself says that he sometimes doesn't do the necessary digging and he doesn't tell us when where or who, then he should not be citable in an encyclopedia."  This would be true enough, but there was no "digging" to be done, and we know the when/where/who of this information.  Sometimes his column cannot be trusted.  We must always question him on a case-by-case basis to determine when such a situation arises, which you seem to be unwilling to do.  You've compared this to Weekly World News or People Magazine, but this interview is not farcicle.  We should consider it more closely than that.--Cast (talk) 07:06, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

Since this little issue was raised, I couldn't help but feel that I'd read Alan's quote about plot holes elsewhere. A quick Google search revealed that the quote pulled from this interview ("...it had plot holes you couldn't have got away with...") was used in an article ("V for... Villany Guy on Film" by Graeme Virtue, 10/30/2005) on BNET, a business news website published by CNET Networks, Inc., and owned by the CBS corporation. If their editorial staff considers this interview a verifiable source, that's good enough for me. Or we could just quote directly from this article instead. It can't possibly be confused for a "gossip column", after all.--Cast (talk) 07:06, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Primary sources are preferable to secondary sources. But BNET's acceptance of the LITG interview supports its usage here. The cited column pretty clearly differentiates its contents from gossip. - JasonAQuest (talk) 13:56, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Look a fanatic is somebody stuck on a point, whether it be Kim Kardashian's butt, Harry Potter or Iraq. In this case, rather than realizing that there is NO VERIFIED source for the quote and that the article does not suffer for the lack of information you two are fanatically trying to justify (oh look, CBS used the quote!  Well Scientologists use Wikipedia for citations and they shouldn't because of fanatics who edit it)inserting information.  Of course I am going to juistify my comments because they are true- watch tv, go outside, ride a horse if you don't like girls- do anything except try to justify a quote from a gossip column whose author says even her doesn't trust everything he writes.  This is not the NY Times.  This is an online site that notes it is full of "gossip and rumors".  He should be read for fun not cited in an encyclopedia.Allknowingallseeing (talk) 15:47, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * We've been down this road with you. We've held your hand every step of the way.  This author publishes a gossip column, but in the preface to this article, he states that it, and several articles following it for a period of several weeks, would be written in the style of investigative journalism.  This author has received praise for his investigative journalism, which is highly credible when he attempts it.  This author made comments that his gossip column could not be trusted, but this was not a gossip column as he wrote it.  This is a verified source.  What is being cited is a uncontroversial, direct quote, which does not threaten to disparage Alan Moore's reputation.  Moore has not made any comments elsewhere about being falsely quoted during the interview.  The author has not retroactively edited it.  It has been used as a primary source for an article posted on a corporate news website.  Step-by-step we have provided this information, and still you cling to the assertion that because the author writes a gossip column, this work cannot be trusted.  I have given you the chance I said I would, and am no longer interested in humoring your skepticism, personal insults, and accusations of bad faith.
 * To all other editors concerned with this issue, I believe that there is consensus to use this quote, with Allknowingallseeing's obstinate objection being irrelevant, as the user has failed to provide any reason to doubt the validity of the source. --Cast (talk) 16:39, 24 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Addendum Alternatively, we could take it to the WikiProject Comics talk page, as Emporer advised above.  If everyone feels there is still reason to pursue this discussion, that is probably the place to do it now.--Cast (talk) 16:50, 24 September 2008 (UTC)


 * I don't really see the need to prolong the discussion - Mr A.K.A.S makes some valid and impassioned points. They are however, in this case, slightly misdirected.
 * He writes: "I am attacking their desire to jam self important tidbits of information into an article under BLP." In fact, the titbits of information are supportive/indicative of the wider picture of Mr Moore's dissatisfaction with the adaptations of his comics into films. Which, clearly, he (on some level) allowed to go ahead. And which are statements made out-of-hand about films he has stated that he hasn't seen... nevertheless they are qualified as his stated opinions. They are sourced directly to him, by a safe and believeable quantum of proof/preponderance of evidence.
 * A.K.A.S. continues: "I do not think enough people realize that BLP is actually more important that the entire project- if we hurt one reputation we should close down." This is a very valid point. I can only begin to imagine how furious one would be in such a circumstance. It should not have to occur; it should not have to be dealt with, but unfortunately there are people who derive pleasure from vandalism and pointless, libellous comments. But to tar a whole project and every editor with the same brush as the few - and they are few - idiots and time-wasters is both deeply unfair and highly inaccurate. It must also be very distressing/damaging when libelous or inaccurate comments can be edited in at whim, and (potentially) remain at large for a considerable period of time.
 * However, surely the logical reaction against such happenings should not be to simply try (and fail) to quash them - and such attempts will likely fail in large part because the Internet is vast. The logical reaction therefore should be the counter-attack - the meeting and beating of inaccuracy and falsehoods with truth and accuracy. It should be to assist in improving articles; to assist in sourcing and improve accuracy. If, for example, 'celebrities' and people in positions with the wherewithall to confirm, refute, source and comment on inaccuracies - and accuracies, even if those accuracies may not be particularly agreeable to everyone, particularly when criticism is involved - were to lend their considerable weight to helping improve the BLP articles, that would be considerable more help than attempting to squash the whole encyclopedia project, or parts thereof.
 * An inaccurate article is an unhelpful aberration. No article is, however, even more unhelpful, because it leads to precisely the sort of speculation, rumor-mongering and slander that is at the core of this debate. An accurate, sourced article is always the best way to quash rumors and inaccuracies. Similarly, comments/events edited out or glossed over will lead to speculation, while refutation will ultimately lead to acceptance. Mr Moore doesn't want his works turned into films, and thinks that the films were likely not any good. So? Let him think that. He's MORE than entitled to hold that opinion. Some of us are able to enjoy From Hell, V for Vendetta and The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen as comics AND films, but can also respect (if not wholly agree) with the Moorean criticisms.
 * A.K.A.S. continues: "So unless the "fact" is citable from a reputable source it does NOT belong in a BLP- ever ever ever. If Rich himself says that he sometimes doesn't do the necessary digging and he doesn't tell us when where or who, then he should not be citable in an encyclopedia." That's a logical fallacy, and an untenable position to hold, really. Essentially, it's trying to suggest that if Rich does not dig far enough once, that renders everything he writes as inaccurate as that hypothetical inaccuracy. Or, if a person misspeaks, misquotes, lies or is simply wrong, everything they say or do is likewise. That's clear nonsense. Moreover, you clearly say that a "fact" must be "citable" - but what citations would you theoretically approve..? Any publication can be wrong. Any person can be wrong - even about themselves, in some cases (deliberately or otherwise)! Generally speaking, however, first-hand information is irrefutable. But, since we all have different experiences, we rely on second-hand information, which can be inaccurate, but generally is not. Healthy skepticism should nor defer to unhealthy disbelief and disregard of everything.
 * I do understand where you are coming from - I suspect most people here do, broadly. But you are advocating the wrong course of action. Absolutely "facts" should be double-checked. Definitely citations should be the best they can be. Wikipedia even goes so far as to say - and I think that this is too far, but it's hard to come up with an alternative - that "truth" should play second fiddle to "provability." This means some truth does not get told. This means some 'proveable', but untrue "facts" are eminently citable, until torn apart. This means that particular sources and fonts of information may be acceptable for one "fact," but unacceptable for another. It is palpably clear that DC withdrew and pulped League of Extraordinary Gentlemen Vol. 1 #5 because of the "Marvel" advertisement - I've seen both, many people have read the flippant asides and references in LoEG and Top Ten. Many people have read informed and ill-informed speculation. But, as you pointed out the other day, a proveable source for this "fact" is elusive. The source for Mr Moore being deeply unhappy or annoyed - and possibly, in many cases, wholly unjustified in his complaints - can only be Mr Moore himself. And to cite that, he has to be filtered through journalism, interview or tape recorder. Either of those can be cited. Johnston did the first two in his non-Gutters Gutters.
 * Raising concerns and queries is very helpful; offering alternate views or opinions is also helpful. Offering sources is exceptionally helpful. Some statements should definitely be removed. Others, particularly those which are stated personal opinions, and not contentious or slanderous (which these here were not) need merely to be cited, and citations for those come in many more varieties than the New York Times. ntnon (talk) 01:07, 25 September 2008 (UTC)
 * ntnon I have to seriously bow down before you- you are smarter than I and of course the less illuminated Jason. Everything you write is intelligent. Where do we divurge?  It has to do with journalistic standards.  I have been involved in articles in The New Yorker and Vanity Fair.  They have FACT CHECKERS who call and confirm pertinent facts before running a piece.  So they don't get sued (currently Wikipedia is protected from suits but this will change no doubt in the next 18 months).  If you cite those two magazines I know it is true.  Same with most reputable newspapers (no not the Washington Times).  Rich is not fact checked, loves to gossip like my grandma and likes to promote rumors in the hopes of leading to the truth.  HENCE, he himself says to me on IM that he is not to be trusted.  Fine.  It is not a logical fallacy to distrust him- even if what he says is good.  If he says "I saw Alan Moore walk on water" that's fine- but it ain't true!Allknowingallseeing (talk) 06:13, 25 September 2008 (UTC)


 * That's probably one of the most succinct (and helpful) description of 'good sources' that I've read, so I thank you for that nugget of first hand knowledge. And although it's a little harsh, a little broad and still a little unfair, that's also not an entirely unreasonable summary of Mr Johnston's Lying... columns. My problem, though, revolves wholly around the question of (journalistic or otherwise) interviews, and statements that might be made. How - and I ask this both rhetorically AND genuinely! - can you fact-check an interview-opinion? If you/someone gave an interview to the NYT and said "Person X told me Y," the NYT might be able to phone up Person X to confirm this as being true. Fair enough, and helpful. But if Person X is dead..? Or what if you say "I did/think Y"..? Surely in those cases there is no-one to phone up to have something independantly verified... Now, because of that, it is important to add a qualifier, such as: "..A.K.A.S thinks/says/believes.. Y," and not merely say "Y is true."
 * Accordingly - assuming only that an interviewer will genuinely not set out to deliberately misrepresent/misquote his/her subject (and there are obviously misrepresentations, mis-contextualisations and errors that creep in, but by and large anyone who has interviewed more than one person is generally likely to be accurately reporting their words) - this should suggest that almost-any interview can be a valid source for a person's personal opinions, regardless of forum or publication venue. (This is of course deliberately overstating things for the purposes of rhetorical, theoretical and enlightening debate. But I would certainly tend towards thinking that that's a reasonable assumption to make in most cases.)
 * News, no. "Facts;" not necessarily. "Opinions;" yes, (so long as they aren't libellous or designed merely to antagonise - and honest opinions can certainly antagonise, but tend not to be offered solely for that reason, which is another important distinction). So it's certainly important not to rely on such information/sources, but they shouldn't be automatically dismissed, I don't think. We were taught, for example, that overtly hagiographic historical records are extremely helpful and useful sources - not as accurate records of their subject, but as indications of their treatment of same. Likewise, while an opinion piece may skirt, twist or ignore 'the facts,' it tells us something of the mindset of the writer. While an interview-given comment may not reflect anyone else's opinion, it is nonetheless a reflection of a genuine belief/thought/opinion (or sarcasm, perhaps, but still).
 * I think it is still illogical to distrust Rich('s information) - doubt is fine, but distrust is a baby and bathwater scenario. If he says "I saw Alan Moore walk on water," that's (probably) not true. If he says "I saw Alan Moore walk on water at 5.37pm on the banks of the river Thames surrounded by a dozen witnesses," that bears further investigation. But the really pointed example is this one: If he says "While interviewing Alan Moore, he told me he can walk on water," we can still doubt the fact, and certainly therefore tend towards disbelieving the accuracy of the statement, but we can also reasonably lean towards believing that the statement was made..! We might reasonably dismiss it as a flippant, sarcastic aside, drawn from a longer, context-setting phrase; we might then even be slightly annoyed that the surrounding context was not given, but we could still think it quite possible that it was said, and refer to it having been said. Maybe...! ntnon (talk) 01:02, 26 September 2008 (UTC)


 * I think this last point is a good one - if Rich Johnson quotes what Alan Moore said we can be pretty sure that what he is relaying is actually the words of Alan Moore (he has done a lot of interviews in the past and I don't think anyone is going to suggest he is going to be making up statements in an interview with such a high-profile figure as Alan Moore - he is not adverse to voicing his opinion on such matters, considering he says that he has been misquoted in movie promotions, and can always find a venue to voice those opinions) - if he was caught out his name would be mud and CBR could kiss goodbye to the majority of their exclusive interviews. So I don't think we have too much of a problem there.
 * It still comes back to whether, at that time, we can consider LitG as being a gossip column. I think it is OK but I suspect we are pretty much at an impasse and I am unsure how successful throwing more well-reasoned arguments at it is, as the issue is a bit more fundamental (and is based on consensus and precedent). Considering that, in the course of this discussion, the article has lost its GA status (although not down to anything being discussed here) it feels like a lot of wasted effort from quite a few good editors with proven track records of improving articles.
 * The only solution I see is:
 * Find something similar from a bona fide reliable source - it isn't like he has been quiet about this area and there are at least a dozen recent interviews from solid sources - nothing quite making that exact same point but they are pretty similar which might suggest if he has been forthright when V for Vendetta came around there must be something we can use even if it isn't quite that quote (who doesn't enjoy a good referencing of Whizzer and Chips?).
 * We take it to the Comic Project talk page and thrash it out there (with no consensus being a no to the link - as we have to err on the side of caution).
 * I'd suggest doing it in that order and when we feel we have exhausted the alternatives we turn to the second option. Granted he seems to have got more vocal recently but there are interviews on V for Vendetta out there: fill your boots. (Emperor (talk) 02:39, 26 September 2008 (UTC))


 * I've steered clear of this for a while to avoid having to deal with AKAS. But his User page was still on my watchlist, and I see he's been confirmed as an individual with a conflict of interest on the subject (i.e. Moore doesn't like the movie that he made either), and furthermore, he's been (re)blocked.  So maybe now cooler heads can look at this more objectively.  I've added a quote from MTV.com about Moore's objection to the film's treatment (or avoidance) of fascism and anarchy.  But I think Moore's chips-and-eggy quote provides additional insight into his state of mind, and we seem to have consensus that the source is reliable enough. Any sound reason we can't use it? Jason A. Quest (talk) 18:49, 30 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Although Col Scott and his socks (great name for a band by the way) game the system for their own ends, you can only do that based on relatively solid grounds and there is an existing consensus that we can't use internet gossip columns like Lying in the Gutters as a source (even if they are on sites would usually use). I think there is a loophole i due to his doing more investigative journalism but I stick by the points above - we should look for a better source which says the same thing and/or take it back to the Comics Project to refine the consensus (or at least address this on a case-by-case basis). That way we have our back covered on this. (Emperor (talk) 00:21, 31 December 2008 (UTC))

Comics Project B-class asssessment
This was flagged as one of our highest importance articles without a B-class assessment. I've looked it over and it still needs more references (a couple of sections only one or two when there are other statements, especially ones about motivation and disputes). I've tagged the major points and will leave off doing an assessment for the time being as it looks like they might be around in other references on the page or on the relevant articles.

I am also still concerned about the use of Lying in the Gutters (see above discussion), especially as the whole section on the LXG lawsuit is currently only supported by them. Looking through Cast of Characters vs. The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen lawsuit it is clear there are other sources that can be used for this. (Emperor (talk) 21:53, 27 January 2009 (UTC))


 * Also addressing those points will also set the article up well for a push on to GA (which will involve a polish and denser referencing, so if you can reference anything not tagged and not currently referenced then do so. (Emperor (talk) 22:00, 27 January 2009 (UTC))

Education?
Where did he receive his education? 63.76.234.250 (talk) 16:22, 27 February 2009 (UTC)

Pat Mills buying his scripts?
There's a bit in the "Early work" section that says Moore, after submitting some scripts to 2000AD, 'came to the attention of editor Pat Mills, who, describing Moore as "a really fucking good writer," bought "one-off scripts... on a regular basis" from Moore'. It's referenced to page 75 of David Bishop's Thrill Power Overload. I was under the impression that Pat Mills had been the originating editor of 2000AD, but resigned to go freelance again as soon as it was up and running, and Moore didn't start writing for 2000ADuntil it had already been published for several years, so Mills is unlikely to have bought any scripts off Moore. Could someone with access to Thrill Power Overload check the reference and see if it's right? --Nicknack009 (talk) 16:54, 17 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Thanks for flagging this. The bits you highlight are confusing and factually incorrect. Here is actually what is on page 75 (and slightly over into 76):
 * Grant (sub-editor at the time) remembers fishing through the unsolicited submissions pile and found this script. He realised everything in it was twice as long as it should be and was mentally working out where he could cut it down, but concluded he couldn't without ruining the story: "I ended up thinking this guy's a really fucking good writer." So he kicked it back to Moore and asked him to reduce it by 30-50% and when he did they bought the script.
 * However, it also quotes from The Extraordinary Works of Alan Moore where Moore recalls it was a Judge Dredd script and he says he got a letter back from Grant saying he liked Moore's storytelling ability and asked him to submit a Future Shock, which he did and the rest is history, just history people remember different ways.
 * So although Mills is mentioned on the same page it has nothing to do with Moore. The longer version of the other snippet quoted is (start on page 75 - I'll flag where it goes over the page): "His first work was published by IPC was a one-off tale called Holiday in Hell in 2000 AD Sci-Fi Special of 1980. He soon began selling one-off scripts to 2000 AD on a regular basis, his first appearance in the weekly coming with 'The Killer in The Cab', /P76 published in Prog 170. 'The Future Shocks were a bit few and far between to start with, it was just when they needed one.' Over the next three years Moore contributed more than fifty short stories to the comics, writing a mixture of Future Shocks and Time Twisters"
 * Also the next TPO reference should probably be 94-95 which deals with Skizz - all there is on page 93 is a sentence right at the end which says: "The comic was in rude health, with Slaine and Moore's first full-length 2000 AD stories waiting in the wings" - this is pretty much a lead into the start of Chapter 9 and I wouldn't reference it specifically - 94-95 are the start of the next chapter that looks at this in detail. The Bleasdale quote is correct.
 * There is also quite a good quote on page 76 (from 10 Years of 2000 AD) some of which might be useful:
 * For a long time I considered the idea of a career in comics, but thought the sort of comics I wanted to do wouldn't really find a place in the mainstream comic field. Seeing an issue of 2000 AD for the first time, and reading these incredibly aware and funny strips by John Wagner and Pat Mills, I realised there were adults at work here. They were doing stuff they enjoyed and that other adults could enjoy. I thought, well, maybe there is a place for me in comics. I'm sure that's not an uncommon experience among British comics creators. You suddenly got a huge burst of British talent coming through 2000 AD who might otherwise have stayed outside the field. Because we were allowed a certain amount of freedom... that enabled us to show what we could do without restraints. We could do stories that were funny, stories that were affecting
 * Hope that helps. Remember if anyone needs something checking from a book then we are building a list here: WP:CMC/BOOKS. So you could find someone who has the book. (Emperor (talk) 15:51, 18 March 2009 (UTC))


 * Thanks for checking that. I've corrected the Pat Mills passage, and I'll have a think about whether/how to use the rest of the material you've provided. --Nicknack009 (talk) 17:07, 18 March 2009 (UTC)


 * Yes use your best judgement there. It might be you could just go with: 'Moore had initially felt "the sort of comics I wanted to do wouldn't really find a place in the mainstream comic field" but after reading 2000 AD he concluded "maybe there is a place for me in comics'(Bishop 2007, page 76) - if need be you can also add the fuller quote to the footnote. I was wondering if this would work in the main 2000 AD article but it is already pretty big and if it is reworked and properly sourced (a BIG JOB I am dodging for the moment) then space will be at a premium. However, I will keep it in mind and see what I can do (perhaps a section on "influence" and looking at the British Invasion (comics). (Emperor (talk) 17:14, 18 March 2009 (UTC))