Talk:Alano Edzerza

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 January 2020 and 13 March 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Angel Miranda 24. Peer reviewers: Gtaguines.

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Great job with your article but there are a myriad of glaring grammar and punctuation mistakes ie "that group are known for Tattos The tatto design." The sources you chose to cite are really great and are reliable, but be sure to put citations in for the art works you have listed instead of putting links to the images. Some of your citations though link the viewer to an e-commerce site where you can purchase the items, do not do that. Do your best to find an article that references your artist's work, not an unreliable and untrustworthy link. Within the career section, try to take a more neutral stance when speaking about Alono. Other than that, great job. Gtaguines (talk) 16:52, 25 February 2020 (UTC)Gtaguines