Talk:Alastair Hannay

Needs review of Hannay's own work
I wrote the stub for this. Will work on rest of article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Grammatophile (talk • contribs) 14:22, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

Needs a re-write to be grammatical
The second sentence does not appear to make a grammatical sentence. It could do with a comma in place of a full stop, but this would make the sentence too long. I guess that what I am saying is that this whole article could do with a re-write. Vorbee (talk) 18:05, 6 January 2019 (UTC)