Talk:Alban Lafont/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

I should have this done by Sunday JAG  UAR   11:36, 2 June 2017 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * The lead needs to be expanded to summarise all of the article. At the moment it doesn't comply per WP:LEAD
 * "He spent six years with Lattoise before signing with Ligue 1 side Toulouse in 2014." - this needs a citation
 * "when a group of armed gunmen opened fire in a Cappuccino restaurant" - I don't think this needs italicising
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No original research found.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

I'll leave this on hold until the lead can be expanded to summarise the article. Otherwise everything is OK. JAG UAR   18:20, 3 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Hi, thank you for the review! I have expanded the lede as requested. Let me know if there are any other issues that pop up. Cheers, Liam E. Bekker (talk) 22:28, 3 June 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing all of the issues! Most importantly the lead has been expanded to a suitable length so I think this should be good to go now.  JAG  UAR   10:05, 4 June 2017 (UTC)