Talk:Albania at the 2006 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 23:14, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Will start review now.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 23:14, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * Looks good!

Background

 * "and have competed in every Summer Olympics since then." - Remove "then"
 * "Albania has never won a medal at the Olympics" - "The nation has never won a medal at the Olympics"

Alpine skiing

 * "On 18 February, Tola took part in the Super-G competition, he finished the single-run rac ein a time of one minute and forty-four seconds, earning him 56th place, which was last among competitors who managed to finish the race" --> "On 18 February, Tola took part in the Super-G competition. He finished the single-run race in a time of 1 minute and 44, placing 56th; the last among competitors who finished the race"
 * I'm pretty sure this is a non-issue but why is "Super-G" capitalize but not "giant slalom"?
 * NO clue, but skiing does it consistently. Courcelles (talk) 23:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "posting leg times of one minute and thirty seconds and one minute and thirty-two seconds." - Change to something like "...posting run times of 1 minute and 30 seconds, and 1 minute and 32 seconds, respectively."
 * "His combined total was good for 35th place out of 41 competitors who finished both runs" --> "His combined total places him in 35th place out of 41 competitors who finished both runs"
 * "On 25 February, he participated in the slalom, but was unable to finish the race" - Any chance there is a source somewhere that maybe mentions he fell or something (other than "unable to finish")? If nothing can be found, no worries.
 * I looked, I can find lots of sources that record the DNF, but nothing that expounds on it. It's most likely a fall, because a missed gate results in a disqualification, not a DNF, but that'd be pure OR to put in. Courcelles (talk) 23:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * I think I've addressed everything, no in-line responses this time, {{u}Dom497}}, but thanks for another review. Courcelles (talk) 23:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
 * re-ping, Courcelles (talk) 23:43, 1 May 2018 (UTC)