Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2006/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:16, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Not too sure why the timestamp is not working, but I will review this shortly! --K. Peake 18:16, 17 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Florian Kondi is not sourced as the songwriter anywhere in the body despite the infobox mention
 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * Target previous contest to Eurovision Song Contest 2005
 * "the Eurovision Song Contest," → "the Eurovision Song Contest 2006,"
 * "Performing as number sixth," → "Performing as number six,"

Background

 * "The highest placing" → "The country's highest placing"
 * "which the country achieved in" → "which it achieved in"
 * "The country's national broadcaster," → "Albania's national broadcaster,"
 * "organises Festivali i Këngës since" → "has organised Festivali i Këngës since"
 * "simultaneously wins the right to" → "has simultaneously won the right to"

Festivali i Këngës

 * "The national broadcaster of Albania, Radio Televizioni Shqiptar (RTSH), organised the" → "RTSH organised the"
 * Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës
 * "to determine their participant" → "to determine Albania's participant"
 * "and Albanian presenter Drini Zeqo." → "and presenter Drini Zeqo." since the use of "Albanian" earlier in the sentence makes his nationality clear

Competing entries

 * Good

Semi-finals

 * "on 16 December and 17 December 2005." → "on 16 December and 17 December 2005, respectively."

Final

 * "Luiz Ejlli with "Zjarr e ftohtë" emerged as the winner of the competition" → "Luiz Ejlli emerged as the winner with "Zjarr e ftohtë""
 * Where does the source mention his win as being before the end of the show?
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2006

At Eurovision

 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2006
 * Target Nikos Galis Olympic Indoor Hall to O.A.C.A. Olympic Indoor Hall
 * "on 18 May, and the final" → "on 18 May and the final" because this article is not written in American English
 * Target to Rules of the Eurovision Song Contest should solely be on "Eurovision rules" text
 * "and the "Big 4"," → "and the "Big Four"," per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "although the top ten countries" → "although the top 10 countries" per MOS:NUM
 * "Due to the non-top 10 result the 2005 contest," → "Due to its non-top 10 result in the 2005 contest,"
 * The source does not mention Albania's result in the 2005 contest

Voting

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, but it is great to take this on as you have been nominating these articles again! --K. Peake 21:36, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Hello, thank you for the review. I responded to all your comments.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:19, 17 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, very good to wake up to this and nice find in changing non-top 10 to non-top 11 from the source you added! --K. Peake 07:12, 18 January 2021 (UTC)