Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2012/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:59, 5 January 2021 (UTC)

Followed through with my previous comment; I will start reviewing this today! --K. Peake 09:59, 5 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Wikilink Festivali i Këngës in the infobox
 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * Wikilink music video
 * "on 26 May," → "on 26 May 2012,"

Background

 * "it achieved during its debut in " → "it achieved in 2004" since that year has already been introduced as the country's debut earlier in this para

Festivali i Këngës

 * Add to the img text that the competition was used to select Albania's participant for the Eurovision Song Contest 2012
 * "The national broadcaster," → "The national broadcaster of Albania,"
 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * "to select Albania's participant" → "to select their participant"
 * "shortlisted to compete" → "that were shortlisted to compete"
 * "few days prior" → "a few days prior"
 * "it ultimately released" → "RTSH ultimately released"

Competing entries

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION; you did not add this for the 2019 one here but I have fixed that for you; try a similar caption

Semi-finals

 * "semi-final with ten entries" → "semi-final, with 10 entries" per MOS:NUM

Final

 * "Each member of the jury voted by..." where is this part backed up?
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest

Promotion

 * "An accompanying music video for" → "A music video for"
 * "premiered on the official YouTube channel of the Eurovision Song Contest on" → "premiered via the Eurovision Song Contest's official YouTube channel on"
 * "at various Eurovision Song Contest-related events," → "at various events related to the contest,"
 * Remove wikilinks on the countries

At Eurovision

 * Img looks good
 * "held on 22 and 24 May, and" → "held on 22 and 24 May, respectively, and"
 * ", and the ," → " and the ," since the article is not in American English
 * Target grand final to Eurovision Song Contest 2012
 * "the country was set to" → "Albania was set to"
 * "would be performing third," → "would be performing third in the grand final,"
 * "and preceding the ." → "and preceding ."

Voting

 * "in the contest's semi-final and final," → "in both the first semi-final and the grand final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2012,"
 * "and in the final of the contest to Greece." → "and to Greece in the final of the contest."

Points awarded to Albania

 * Good

Points awarded by Albania

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, though it is good to see you picked up on a number of my previous comments for this article! --K. Peake 14:48, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Hope you're well. Thanks for another review; I responded to all your suggestions.--Lorik17 (talk) 15:26, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for implementing the changes and I did some moderate copy editing, plus the query about each member of the jury voting is invalid since I checked the source properly and found the info; my error there. ✅ now, plus I do now recall reviewing GANs of yours before the Eurovision Song Contest articles after looking at your work! --K. Peake 16:04, 5 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you also for your edits. Bes regards!--Lorik17 (talk) 16:09, 5 January 2021 (UTC)