Talk:Albania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2013/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:48, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

I will start my review of this tonight or tomorrow; however, you need to fix the nomination template for the other song contest participation of Albania since it is currently displaying the review as unknown on the music GANs page. --K. Peake 17:48, 9 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * "and a live performance in the Netherlands." → "and a live performance, the latter of which was in the Netherlands."
 * "to qualify to for the final" → "to qualify for the final" with the target
 * You have not removed the excess word from here. --K. Peake 15:08, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * "to qualify to for the final" is still the wording – fix this. --K. Peake 15:59, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Done--Lorik17 (talk) 16:03, 10 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Either add one or more sentences to the second para or make the lead only one para, as the last para is much too short right now

Background

 * "finishing in the seventh place," → "and finished in the seventh place,"

Festivali i Këngës

 * Shouldn't the img be aligned to the left since the succeeding one is on the right?
 * This works fine, doesn't it? --K. Peake 15:08, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * I think its appropriate as it is because there is enough space between both images but if you don't agree with it I can change it.--Lorik17 (talk) 15:14, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Images usually have different alignments for multiple appearances, but this is not a GA requirement so it can remain. --K. Peake 15:59, 10 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Target Radio Televizioni Shqiptar to RTSH
 * "on 22 December 2012 held at the" → "on 22 December 2012, being held at the" to specify the entire competition was held at the venue
 * "to participate in the competition," → "to participate in Festivali i Këngës,"
 * "being shortlisted to" → "with them being shortlisted to"
 * "On 30 November," → "On 30 November 2012,"

Competing entries

 * Table is missing the appropriate source(s)

Semi-finals

 * "In it, the shows featured guest performances by" → "During the semi-finals, guest performances were featured from"

Final

 * "emerged as the winner and were simultaneously announced as the country's" → "emerged as the winning artists and were simultaneously announced as Albania's"

Promotion

 * "premiered via the Eurovision Song Contest's official YouTube channel of the Eurovision Song Contest on" → "premiered via the official YouTube channel of the Eurovision Song Contest on"

At Eurovision

 * It is not mentioned anywhere by the source that the draw was held at the Malmö City Hall, even though the remainder of the sentence is backed up
 * "for the 2013 contest" → "for the contest"
 * "among the top 10 entries in the second semi-final" → "among the top 10 entries" since we already know it is an entry in the second semi-final
 * Target final to Eurovision Song Contest 2013
 * "in the contest." → "in the Eurovision Song Contest."
 * The last sentence is completely unsourced

Voting

 * All of the points at which you write "the first semi-final" are inaccurate; the country competed in the second semi-final
 * "by the country on" → "by the country for"
 * "the country finished in" → "Albania finished in"
 * "In the final, Albania awarded its 12 points to Macedonia in the semi-final," → "Albania awarded its 12 points to Macedonia in the second semi-final,"

Points awarded to Albania

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, but I particularly noticed you have improved in terms of ref layout; good luck with the article though! --K. Peake 09:19, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, I followed your comments. :)--Lorik17 (talk) 14:41, 10 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ now after you fixed that one last query! --K. Peake 16:16, 10 January 2021 (UTC)