Talk:Albanian revolt of 1432–1436/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 12:15, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

I'll be doing this review in the next couple of days.


 * Ottoman terms were explained


 * I used spahi instead of timariot as that would imply that the landowners were already timar holders (timariots) prior to the land distribution
 * Ibrahim's location added, Venetian territories changed to Venetian territories in the region, to which the map acts supplementarily, while there are some relevant details on the aftermath section
 * Instead of capitalising sanjak (province) I lowercased it as we wouldn't use the Province is located ... in English
 * Wikilinked war galley, Mehmed II, cadastre and reduced Shkodër links
 * Changed status quo ante to status quo ante bellum (yes, I was referring to the centralization policies)
 * I don't know if there are any exact statistics on the annual income of Ottoman Albania in the early 15th century, but Under the previous taxation code, farmers were required to pay a tenth of their seasonal agricultural output, 1 ducat and 4 groshe (two-ninths of a ducat) to their lords. seems quite concise in terms of providing a better understanding regarding the tax system of the empire and specifically its treatment of Muslims and non-Muslims. The sea. agr. output of a farmer (the overwhelming majority of the population) would be ~12.2 ducats, but I don't know what part of that was "monetized" and what part remained "nonmonetary consumption capacity".-- — ZjarriRrethues — talk 19:39, 29 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Accept all that. I have made a few changes to the prose per above. Peacemaker67 (send... over) 23:06, 29 November 2012 (UTC)