Talk:Albany Convention Center

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Comments by WikiCopter: Looking good, Upstater! WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 03:41, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The second sentence in the lead is somewhat awkward, I don't exactly know how to rewrite it. WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 01:40, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 2) *Fixed.  upstate NYer  03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 3) In the lead, the phrase "the main draw" (emphasis added) threw me off. Can you replace draw with a synonym (I don't know what it means). WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 01:45, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 4) *Draw → incentive.  upstate NYer  03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 5) The word lead appears also in other sections with the same usage. Can you take care of them too? WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 01:49, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 6) After the seventh paragraph in the History section, there is a comment that states . Have you taken care of that?  WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 01:56, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 7) *Yea, I still have to figure that out. I haven't seen it in the sources yet.  upstate NYer  03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 8) The history section is large, can you split it into several subsections? WikiCopter RadioChecklistFormerly AirplanePro 02:04, 24 September 2010 (UTC)
 * 9) *Added some sub-headings.  upstate NYer  03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)

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