Talk:Albert Pike Memorial/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:56, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 09:56, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In lead:
 * thousands of Masons Can "Mason" be linked properly?
 * Mason redirects to a dab page. Freemasonry, which is linked in the first sentence, is the target article. APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
 * eighteen Civil War  Can we say "18" so that it looks less wordy? WP:MOSNUM also recommends this.
 * ✅ APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Background:
 * Albert Pike (1809–1891) Can these years be added in the lead as well?
 * Can "brigadier general" be linked?
 * Gaetano Trentanove (1858–1937) Do we need the years here?
 * ✅ APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Who is Fonderia Galli?
 * The Smithsonian lists him as the founder of this statue and others, but that's all the info I have. APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Dedication:
 * 2pm Say 2 P.M.
 * The quotes would be more attractive if we use quote templates
 * ✅ APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Reception:
 * There is not a jot of reliable proof  You mean "lot"?
 * The quote says "jot". APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)


 * In Design and location:
 * Duplicate links: Morals and Dogma of the Ancient and Accepted Scottish Rite of Freemasonry, Scottish Rite
 * Can granite be linked?
 * ✅ APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

That should be it. These done, I would be happy to promote this beautiful article. Cheers! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 06:58, 7 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank so much for taking the time to review the article. I appreciate it! APK whisper in my ear  01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the fast reply. I believe this article is ready for promotion now. Such an awesome work, I am glad to pass this. Cheers! Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 06:35, 8 April 2016 (UTC)