Talk:Albert T. W. Simeons

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This page needs more references. I also suspect there might be some NPOV issues.Chessofnerd (talk) 07:13, 28 November 2011 (UTC) I added a dubious tag due to a lack of references and (as far as I can tell) the material presented does not support the general scientific understanding of hCG despite being presented in a 'this is how it is' way. Could the tone be changed?Chessofnerd (talk) 07:56, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Almost nothing seems to be known of Simeons in WP:RS, either in books or news sites. However, there is a vast amount of content of dubious provenance on the web, none of which is possible to use as a source here. Unfortunately, there seems to be a whole industry based around this, with splogs, etc., just as with the whole acai berry business. I've put the article on watch, and will inform the Medicine WikiProject so others can watch this too. -- The Anome (talk) 01:49, 13 September 2012 (UTC)

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The phrase "weight loss 'scheme'" seems biased to me. Sure, I may use that terminology myself in private conversation but I'm not a NPOV encyclopedia, either. I've changed 'scheme' to 'protocol'. This is technically accurate and the remainder of the article clearly notes that as such, it has no formal scientific support or recognition from the larger medical community.  Jim Reed  (Talk)  14:49, 9 October 2013 (UTC)