Talk:Alderson v. Commissioner

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The first paragraph has nothing to do with the article.

An overdue overhaul
Today I did something it seems no one else here really bothers to do. Ever since added a tone template warning in November 2010, this article has remained terrible. This article is just one of many pathetic articles on this site that read as if they were created as student projects. This article is from '07 and appears to have had the same personal essay format since creation. There were many problems with this page as is the case with these more specific articles. I fixed the tone of this article, finally rewriting it for the first time. I believe this is the first time in this article's history that it has not had some sort of template banner warning of dead-end page, orphaned, tone, etc.. If you're reading this, more articles need to be written and rewritten with a rational, impartial, effective, encyclopedic tone--not just on this website, but ANYWHERE and EVERYWHERE! So, write! Go!