Talk:Alesia Raut

Copyediting
I've done a bit of tidying up on the Alesia Raut article because when I looked at it, there were some problems. There was some material about her failed marriage which made some allegations about her (ex?)-husband which I had to remove. The problem is we have a policy on living people which means that serious allegations about them have to be well referenced and these weren't. I also removed some language which sounded a bit promotional such as "Since that day it was no looking back and she kept on mounting the rungs of glamor and fashion with panache unparalleled". We try and have a more neutral, encyclopaedic tone on Wikipedia. Most of the references here seem poor - YouTube is not a source we like to use here - but I'm sure there will be other more reliable references if only someone who knows the Indian media could find them! Kim Dent-Brown  (Talk)  08:44, 28 August 2013 (UTC)