Talk:Alesta/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TarkusAB (talk · contribs) 22:26, 26 December 2016 (UTC)

I don't typically write/review album articles, but I will give this a try.

Lead
 * "website Cosmpolitan" - Cosmopolitan is actually an international magazine. Although this interview is published online, remove "website" and link Cosmopolitan (magazine) and italicize.

Background and Composition
 * a Romanian music camp camp - remove duplicate word
 * also being to mean --> also meaning
 * version of the album sees --> version of the album show
 * with further lettering appearing --> with lettering displayed
 * were commercialized by --> featured
 * "from other universes" - Not sure what this means. Either provide more context or consider removing
 * Romanian website Cosmopolitan --> Cosmopolitan
 * set to uptempo --> uptempo
 * with some songs being as well performed in French, Romanian and Spanish --> with some songs performed in French, Romanian and Spanish as well

Promotion
 * where she as well released --> where she also released
 * Alesta benefited of a --> Alesta embarked on a
 * last but one --> third and fourth
 * a featuring with Romanian band Havana --> featuring Romanian band Havana

Other
 * One link is dead
 * No copyvio issues

That's all I got! TarkusAB 22:58, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
 * All ✅, besides the "from other planets" thing from the "composition" section, as I think it's clear enough, though. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:16, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Looks good, this one gets a pass. TarkusAB  13:01, 27 December 2016 (UTC)