Talk:Alex Lely/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:35, 23 May 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:35, 23 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Is there any info on the 2005 and 2009 Mosconi Cups? It's not in his career section.
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Lely would be a part of the successful team at the 2008 Mosconi Cup." Probably should add that he was the non-playing captain.
 * added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Don't see the reason to duplicate refs 4, 6, and 23 from one source.
 * Combined Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * And also, probably not the right quote for the latter. "It was my debut in the World Pool Masters and I was collecting autographs of my fellow competitors" is what I found in the ref.


 * removed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Add publishers to references, and archive dates need to be fixed for consistency.
 * "thanks to his win at the Masters." ProPool might be a better source, since it shows that he was on the team unlike AZBilliards.
 * Changed Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "Despite surprisingly" WP:EDITORIAL.
 * Reworded Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 11 (Billiard-Walker) doesn't show year 2000.
 * Changed ref Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 15 needs an archive link.
 * No need to link Ralf Souquet more than once.
 * fixed. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Any chance you can translate the name of the Polish player that Lely defeated in the 2005 European Pool Championships Eight-ball event?
 * Yah, it's my boy Tomasz Kapłan. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Would be a good idea to add that the reference is in Russian too.
 * Would be a good idea to add that the reference is in Russian too.


 * Tagged Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * "2007 WPA World Nine-ball Championship he retired" Comma after championship.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * For ref 19, the author should be put in the right location in cite web.
 * Ref 20 needs a date.
 * Done Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Ref 26 has an author.
 * Added Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Maybe it's just me, but Ref 28 looks really sketchy compared to other sources used.
 * Sadly, that was just the quality of the old World Pool Masters site. I don't think the WPA fixed the site very quickly after they inherited it. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Pictures are fine; OTRS approved.
 * Ideal. Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:52, 25 May 2020 (UTC)

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  02:38, 25 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Should cover it, . Best Wishes,  Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 16:56, 25 May 2020 (UTC)