Talk:Alex Stuart-Menteth/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MrWooHoo (talk · contribs) 15:17, 8 July 2014 (UTC)'

This should be another quick review, just like the last review.

Review

 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * Some prose issues, will be addressed in the section labeled "Comments"
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Lead's length is great, and the rest of the article does follow MOS.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * Fantastic images, tagged with copyyright status.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * See Comments below. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Comments addressed, quick-pass. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  15:38, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * Fantastic images, tagged with copyyright status.
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * See Comments below. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Comments addressed, quick-pass. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  15:38, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
 * Comments addressed, quick-pass. Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  15:38, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

Comments
Redlinks are not required to be fixed, but if you don't mind fixing them that would be great!
 * I think they are all notable (i.e. ships), so a redlink is a useful reminder of that. Thanks, Mat  ty  .  007  15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

Also, could the following quote be put into a quote box, like the one in Ernest Radcliffe Bond?

I vaguely remember being hauled out of the water, but must have passed out, and when I came to, I was lying on the deck in the German destroyer's wardroom. I remember seeing a picture of Hitler on the wall facing me." (You forgot to put a period at the end of the quote, which I did for you.)
 * Thank you, moved to box. Thanks, Mat  ty  .  007  15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)

That's all I got to say ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  15:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
 * replied to both. Thanks again for the review, Mat  ty  .  007  15:36, 8 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Haha, another quick-pass :D! You work really hard on your articles for GA ;) Brandon (MrWooHoo) • Talk to Brandon!  15:37, 8 July 2014 (UTC)