Talk:Alexander Henry Hoff/Archive 1

Assessment
G'day, I have assessed this article as C class on the Milhist scale. I have a couple of suggestions for improvements to take it towards B-class: AustralianRupert (talk) 06:13, 19 March 2016 (UTC)
 * the lead should be expanded to summarise the whole article, including year of birth and death;
 * Done.
 * "U.S. Rendezvous in Albany": can a link be added for this? I couldn't work out what it meant (that said, I'm not from the US, so maybe it is something that a local would understand? I wonder, though, if it is perhaps a typo, and may be it means United States Revenue Cutter Service?
 * No, rendezvous is correct. However there is no available link so I exchanged it with the more understandable recruiting station. ... GELongstreet (talk) 11:06, 19 March 2016 (UTC)