Talk:Alexander S. Wolcott/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: SirGallantThe4th (talk · contribs) 20:36, 10 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello, and thank you for your GA nomination. I will be reviewing this article using the template below.SirGallantThe4th (talk) 16:47, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for review. I'll get started on the issues.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 17:20, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. A thorough copy-edit has been done to the article. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:43, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I still spot a number of grammatical errors throughout the submission, and I am hesitant to pass it until they are fixed. I can do another copyedit of the article tomorrow, after which it will be ready to pass. SirGallantThe4th (talk) 22:33, 11 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I have gone through the article and have made edits to fix grammar and punctuation errors, re-worded overly simplistic sentences, added wikilinks wherever necessary, and removed redundancies or irrelevant information. In particular, a large portion of the "personal life and legacy" section was excised, as much of the information there was either redundant or bore little relevance to the subject.
 * Please thoroughly check the revised article to ensure that no crucial information was lost during this copyedit process. Once I get a confirmation, I will go ahead and pass the article. SirGallantThe4th (talk) 21:16, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I have looked over your edits. Yes, they are good as far as I am concerned. Thanks for the improvements.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 22:02, 12 June 2022 (UTC)